 Matoko Shizaki 2003-03-12 . chapter 1 Wow. this was really touching! Ryu was my fave character and a lot of people overlook his death, even though without his sacrifice, White Base would be doomed. Thanks for writting this great fic. |
 Hilda Heinrich 2003-02-24 . chapter 1* clap* * clap*
One very bittersweet snippet. What I need rite now.
THX for making my day! |
 kishiria 2003-02-21 . chapter 1 That was great. No emotion was repeated twice, and you did get the feel of the characters in only a few sentences. I like the use of small touches to convey the character in a tiny nutshell: Kai's use of D-E-A-D and "pushing up daisies" and Mirai's stopping herself mid-thought to think "that's horrible!" I also enjoyed getting into Job-John's head. Equal time for Job-John! |
 SporkGoddess (not logged in) 2003-02-20 . chapter 1 *applauds* Nice! Short, but sweet. and everyone was extremely IC, to the point that I could imagine the characters saying that. ^_^ |
 Lady Une-chan a.k.a. Mirai 2003-02-20 . chapter 1I liked this. You handled everyone's POV very well. Great job! |