O-O HOW HAVE I NOT READ THIS YET?! My god,I've been missing out. This story...this story was magic on a page. pages. I adore every single word. And the ending...Bitter sweet, but still a fastatic ending with a message that wasn't sappy or cliche, but fit the story like a glove. And teh characters you brought to live weer lively and heroic. Excellent writing.

It's green

ur story is suffering because u keep answering everyones stupid questions. doesnt leave u any space for plot development. and besides, those questions we'l obviously find out soon anyway.

zoro anybody?

Yes, you have had too much sugar. How did you get orange? I have seen it referred to as periwinkle as well, but it appears to the readers as white and green. Check it out yourself! Your disclaimer was hilarious. "So if you decide to sue me, I will have to reward you with a handsome slap to the back of the head and the expletive: ‘You moron!’"and "Attempt to steal any of the latter, and I’ll pass you this note: A meeting has been arranged between: Your **. My foot. Please arrive no later than 2:00 P.M." *Laughs hysterically* I'm like that.

This the only fic to , ever, ever!! make me cry. Seriously. I rarely cry ( I did when Danel died :( That was so sad). This story is amazing! It is now on my top 5 list (in my mind) There was only one part in the book that I thought was a little slow, but other than that! Good God! This fic is amazing! Poor Kenric! That is soo sad! It broke my heart. All your characters are so believable. WoW! Just wow. I love the way you added Goldenlake and Naxen and also the first king and Queen. SO fantastical.

WHAT?!?!? Are you mental?! You call that a happy ending? Happy for Tortal maybe but not really for any of the characters and Kalasin didn't even fall in love or have a civil conversation with Kadder by the end! Though I loved it any way besides being royally ** off the way it ended.

Sounds a little like 'The Mask of Zorro'.

Ah, I enjoyed reading this! Although I'm sort of tired, so I have to confess I skipped a few chapters between here and there. The way you interwove Kalasin's story and Lauryn's story was intriguing and well done. I guess my only complaint would be how pat everything was, even with the tragedy. Travion really being Travis, and then Nathan being Jonathan... one of them would have worked, but both stretched the boundaries of credulity. Aside from that, though--and it wasn't that big a deal--this was great. Thank you for letting me read it.

ooh I haven't finished this chappie but I know Vistra is an anagram of Travis! Woop
I feel clever

no! how could you?!

gar, I liked Kenric. mean writer :(

clever ending, though it is upsetting

krizta! start that chaos born fic! please!

get your lazy but in gear and post chaos born! *kicks said lazy but*

Loved this fic, loved the tragic ending to do with Kenric. Are you going to write any other stories, I mean I know you said in your profile that you are working on some other story but that was of 2006 lol.

Great story. I loved it! That was a really good ending. and poor Kenric!