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Katie
2007-07-04 . chapter 1
You need to finish this!
Ghost of Eternity
2006-09-26 . chapter 1
Too lazy to log in. Anyway, I love this. If you could write a sequel, that would be awesome.
Aly
2004-12-27 . chapter 1
*swoon*
I loved it.

eClaps

-aly-
Lady Parcifal
2004-10-09 . chapter 1
Amazing, stunning... beautiful. Really well-written and great characterisation. I can just imagine Arwen and Faramir ripping Lothiriel's eyes out. LOL. (j/k)
I'd love to see more of this.Is there a sequel coming? :)
Lady-Willowish
2003-11-26 . chapter 1
wow! i like this! u Must keep writing! I'll be checking back soon! There better be more soon! love it! :)
Nikita3
2003-09-30 . chapter 1
Please write more, they should be more Arwen/Eowyn pairings.
Petite Samedi
2003-09-27 . chapter 1
Absolutely gorgeous and stunning.
I love this pairing and your work was beautifully crafted, especially with that twist at the end. Will there be more? It can definitely stand on its own, but a continuation wouldn't disappoint.
xiv
2003-08-16 . chapter 1
This is a beautiful story. It is well constructed and intricate, a marvelous creation. You've captured the manner of speaking perfectly, as well have made it flow with canon.
The Slythrin Dragon
2003-07-01 . chapter 1
very cool
Ella Diver Sophis
2003-06-03 . chapter 1
Have read before elsewhere, but it's very atmospheric, very alive.
Celebaldion
2003-04-02 . chapter 1
It's a shame there aren't more Eowyn/Arwen pairings out there. I'd like to see a sequal to this one. I've never really thought of the Eowyn/Eomer approach before, but I can see how it would work (and be fun to read about). Although the beginning and the end were a little rough (can't put my finger on why) the meat of the story played out nicely.
foreverjaded
2003-03-04 . chapter 1
*is speechless* very well written, good storyline and surprising twist with Eomer at the end-well done! (I'd ignore Tolkien Freak if I were you!)

Kat x
Tolkein Freak
2003-03-03 . chapter 1
Dude, you're freaking me out. If the real J. R. R. Tolkien read this, he'd. I'm not going to go there. Dang, you've got serious problems.
Rhiannon
2003-02-28 . chapter 1
OKAY!NOW I'M MAKING MY REVIEW!This is a very powerful story with a very plausable plot line.Very,very beautifully written and tightly cohesive story,though not for the faint of heart.
I would say,on the other hand,that Arwen would still love Aragorn,if she gives up her immortality for him.But that is just my errant thought.
Way harsh for Eowyn's secret passion for her brother to be so traitorously revealed in such a fashion.That's gotta hurt!And his own wife, being such a cruel ** who uses that sectret agony to control the strong and beautiful Eowyn so she can get off?!(Gets hysterical. punches the wall.)THAT IS ONE! SICK! PUPPY!
My God,poor Eowyn to have to endure that kind of ultimat humiliation.Its not her damn fault she feels this way!OR LOVES HER BROTHER AS SHE CAN LOVE NO OTHER MAN!(In your story anyway.((evil grin..snicker,snicker.)
And the gentle Arwen is witness to her friends humiliation.ouch,that is brutal to see..a friends pain and humiliation is never pretty but that tops the lot!And she remains as comfort and consolation..soothing pain that will never fully go away and revealing her heart and hidden longing as well..It is nice that Arwen,who truly cares for Eowyn as a friend,is also true as a lover.She is not selfish and cruel or interested in soully her own pleasure.She desires love that is true and gives it in return.
I never thought of this pairing until this fic.but I find that it works,if it is balanced right and given depth and and honesty,it can be a profound and true balance.
MORE PLEASE!IT AIN'T DONE YET,AND SO MUCH MORE CAN BE DONE WITH IT!I'M WAITIN'!
(beggs,pleeds,grovels.)
Sally Tse Schiep
2003-02-26 . chapter 1
Great written! I enjoyed the imagination and it's a kind like 'hurra, the story is going ON' after LotR. (I didn't hear of Lothriel and all these weddings before.)
Your stile is fluid and good to read an I favour your Arwen, she ist so nice and reassuring, she made me feel better in some way.
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