Normally i'm not into Arwen, but your story gripped me and drew me right in.
It was almost as if I could see her walking through the deserted rooms. Kind of spooky and really sad. Thanks!

Have I ever mentioned how much I love this story? It's so beautiful and sad. I absolutely adore the wording and imagery. Oddly enough, it makes me want more chapters of Mists of Valinor.

Thanks for the reviews people. :)

To answer Nihtfyr's question: I was trying to imply that he was looking for his mother since she just ran off. hmm, I'll have to look over and see if I can make that more clear. Thank you for the review! :)

Oh Elbereth! How could he even DARE to.
It's all sorry and sad and lightless.
Pour Eldarion. In sympathy and crying for Arwen, yours.

i to ushaullt can't satnd slash but that was brilliant! i feel for Arwen. poor Arwen.
Hope theres a sequel.
Have a nice day
~Elvenflwer~

Ok, so usually I can't stand slash stories, but that? Wow, that was a seriously well written piece of writting.
I feel SO sorry for Arwen! That's just.**shivers**. Stupid Estel! You'd think he would have more sense than to two time Arwen. I hope he gets whats coming to him.
lots of luv,

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Very good. Very very good.

One question though, why was Eldarion in Rivendell. He's the prince of Gondor, and consitering no elves are left in Rivendell why would he come there.

And besides that this story is GREAT!