aw...thats sweet and oh so true. That bit at the end could also be Ginny or Ron. Depending on who the reader thinks it is. Its very clever and well written. The second verse thingo is very clever...I would have never thought of that. But it seems you did...good job.

Macaday me a nut (and your one too!)

Love it. Love it love it love it!

This poem was really nice. It had a lot of emotion put into it.

This poem was truly lovely. I like the metaphor of red defining Harry's life...it's a much more original way to say that he loves Ron than, say, well, other ways he could have said it. And yes, as I am a huge H/R shipper I do see it as a love poem. ;)

M, good poetry. And I loved how you came up with all the red that defines Harry's life, using different periods of the day. S'good. _ Very good! Wish I could write pretty poetry. *sigh*

Cool

Oh, yes this is a good poem!

P.S: (I'll explain thie brainwash thing in cha. 6.

You've got a point about the too late thing; I'm just to lazy to re-do things... )

Aww. I much like this. The touching interlude between Ron and Harry, the imagery, and the cadence. Well done.

Nicely done, and I usually don't care much for poetry. I like that Harry finds some escape and solace from the enormous pressures of his life. Imagine having to have those sort of dreams, and the guilty of maybe forgetting a dream-detail that might have been an important clue. I'm glad Ron is there - whether friend or lover. Thanks Quoth!

Hmm. interesting. Quite sweet. Quite inventive. Quite slashy. Oh, yes.

Now write ore Giving Notice!

This is really quite lovely, how you were able to show the many different ways "red" defines Harry. Of course the most important way, be it by friendship or love, would have to be Ron. Well done!