great job, it's very interesting, I wonder what'll happen later...

Zell: keep reading then, there's like a bazzilion chapters left!

Seifer: please tell me your not so dumb that you think there's a number called "bazzilion"?

Zell: I'm not dumb!

Seifer: so... you, you really think there's a number called "bazzilion"... o.o; ...

Zell: uh... no! of course not! ehehheh... 0_o ... of course not...

Seifer: you retard

Zell: you -CENSORED- **-hole! I'm not -CENSORED- stupid!

Seifer: gr

-THIS FIGHT SEEN IS CENSORED! contains: to many #@$&*!~ f-words, ball-kicking and two "grown" men crying, trust me, It's sad -_-0

That went well... Really. Awesome update. I honestly felt like pulling my hair out over the thick headed, clueless Zane. Gah! But, even so I loved word of it.

The bad guy's "playing" hard to get as well? That will HAVE to make Zane stand still for a moment and clear the cobwebs out. Right? Right?

Looking forward to more...

Happyy Valentines Day!

this story is so long but i'm intrested to read what will happens next so go on.

I just started your story a few days ago, and I have to say I'm definitely impressed. Many stories that are of this length and quality never finish. I'd like to see the end of it, but take you time I'm enjoying it very much! Thx!

I'm still reading this story. I'm loving the Zane/Vreya at the end of this chap. I'm glad your continuing the story. I'll still read every chap. but I might not review.

Oh... I just can't stop grinning^_^
It's good to see this one back from the twighlight zone, at long last^^ ..It's still too soon to tell how your writing has changed regarding this story, perhaps after two or three chapters, which might mean in about a year or so time>< ...whatever-_-
So, in the mean time, I'll be reading your other projects, best of luck to you in them all!!
Oh, by the way, see? You still have plenty of readers here, with more than a dozen replies to the new chapter.. I'm really glad to have any sort of part in having it posted here^~ thanks a million! And yeah; your very own characters just simply raawk!!

AS I was perusing my favorites list, I decided to click on your name and lo and behold, you updated this story! I am one of those old faithful readers and I am SO happy you decided to update! I was seriously sad when you said you weren't going to continue it. As for writing style differences, I haven't seen much of one and there weren't even any horrid typos. Excellent work, and I do hope this encourages you to continue with this story, it's so unique!

Oh my god! I can't tell you how happy this makes me. I absolutely LOVE this fic and I'm in love with your characters, Vreya and Zane (no matter how stupid and stubborn he is). I'm so glad you've found some inspiration to continue this wonderful story. I am so looking foward to your next update (when hopefully Zane might start to "get a clue". . . or not).

So now I have a reason to be in a good mood for the rest of the week. :P

I like that your semi-reviving this story.Please continue writing this story. I'll read it even if it takes a long while

Well, I can't remember the last time I reviewed anything on this site, Though I'm sure the last time was on this story as well (never reviewed any other story) :p

It was... It's hard to say really, I've been out of the story so long I completely lost all images I had of the characters. (Though for some reason the word 'sexy' popped in my head at the name Krysta. I'll have to look up who she was again)

But ye, sorry Angel, I really want to say it was as awsome as the other chapters. I'm sure that the next chapter will bring back some of the feelings I've lost for the story. Oh but you really did depict a clear kingdom hearts scene, I could even imagine a slow-motion shot where Richter runs past Vreya and she catches a glimps. Bravo on that.

I'll await the next chapter and will reserve my praise until then.

Hey I've enjoyed reading your story. I Just found it a little over a month ago and finally reached this point. You have managed to suprise me in some places and meet my expectations in others. You are a great writer and I hope to see more of the story soon. Especially the parts containing Zane. ^_^ Keep writing.

Tell me why is it that every high school has their own personal '** squad'? It's been a very long time since I was in high school but I can still remember their names. . . in fact I grew up right along side of them from grammer school all the way through high school. . . one of them was a best friend until we hit Junior high. I think it has something to do with hormones kicking in too early . . . well, its one theory anyway. . .

Anyway, if I hadn't been so caught up in when the Fated Children were going to make their appearance, I would have been hooked in to the storyline at this point. Now I'm glad I decided to read this fic again...

Sad to think that mankind is so easily willing to slaughter one another when they think it will bring them power. Reminds me a bit of the Crusades. It really did happen, in a way...

I think I said this before, but I wanted to read this again - since I wasn't to conscienscious in leaving reviews before . . . so, um. . . on with the fic!

Love your story so far. Please update soon.