 Mengsk 2/28/11 . chapter 1A true story you say? And an amazing one. Very fine adaption you have made here.
In the beginning I did not understand why you did not place Kit in the Battle of Britain or Midway. Somewhere Kit could use his skills rather than be stuck on the ground. Once the idea of production of bats came up I realised this story was equal to either of those triumphs.
Air Commandos, huh? I know tales of the Commandos raiding Norway. Some operations of the OSS. The Air Commandos I cannot recall ever hearing about. Aside, incidently, from the other side. Hitlers best commando landing a glider to evac Mussolini.
Did these Air Commandos exist? And if so, were they really put in charge of ground operations? |
 Melissa Norvell 3/24/05 . chapter 1This was a wonderful story. I'm now a fan of yours. You did such a great job with the last thing I reviewed, I decided to read more of your things. |
 erosgirl 8/19/04 . chapter 1This was a pretty good story. I liked it, and I usually don't like stories with Kit when he's not the same age as in the show, but good job! Nice use of German. What does 'Ich danke Ihnen vielmals' mean? I know danke is thank you, but danke shen(sp?) is thank you very much, isn't it? So why didn't you put that? Oh, and why did you put Humor in the genre. It was good, but I don't think it was humorous enough to where you would put that in the genre. Maybe it's just me. Wow, looks like I gave you a whole essay, huh? Well, seeya! If you wouldn't mind, could you answer my questions through email? |
 cabegaye 3/10/04 . chapter 1First of all i like to tell this was a GREAT Story. I readed it twice. keep up the good work. |
 Tuesday 1/25/04 . chapter 1 A very inventive plotline. Well-written too. |
 Desslock3 10/11/03 . chapter 1A very well written short story, historicaly accurate and all. Parts of it reminded me of my time in Baghdad. |
 Brianna 3/2/03 . chapter 1This is a good fic. I've always liked TS fics involving the war somehow. I really don't know why, I just do. |
 Alissa1 2/21/03 . chapter 1I've always loved this story. Good job with the foreign language too. It looked like German to me. Although it could be something else, or made up. I actually only speak English and Spanish :) |
 Katarina9 2/20/03 . chapter 1This was a great story. You've completely given Kit the personality I think that he would have. And I like the idea about producing bats. Very creative *Becky must be so proud*. |