Good reasoning.

It is still a sweet day in the life of story.

Pepsi? How on earth would she get a Pepsi? Would they have any access of that sort of thing?

Stick with this story. Even if the Fifth book has come out, keep it up. Far too many good stories are being abandoned.

I think you did the "Flirty Lily" a little too much. Could you soften it a bit?

dreamingfifi

More story please.

The list of abandoned stories is growing. To many author are using ops also known as HP% - the turgid tome to quit updating. Please write more. Double please do NOT include OOtp canon in your story. The turgid tome has so many good things in it and then, poof the plots go nowhere.

Interisting bond, very interesting.

Lily has a diary? or was that a diary? If Elunas is so smart, then how come James was Head Boy?

dreamingfifi

Do they have lockers in Hogwarts? I don't think so, Rowling never mentioned them.

But great story! Looking forward to your next update!

dreamingfifi

EEp! What will he do? I don't think he would tell of them, would he?

dreamingfifi

Another good chapter.but, could you explain a bit more about who is magic and who isn't in E's family.(or is that for later chapters??). Also, the second map is a great addition. I especially like that it does other things.

HOORAY! I've been checking your profile every so often to see when you posted the Elanus story. Yay!! He was such an interesting character in the last story I couldn't wait for this one to begin. Now, this is a good beginning. Although, I'm surprised that E doesn't like Hogwarts very much. I suppose it makes sense though for someone who has a foot in both worlds. Can't wait for more.

woo hoo! Finnaly! Another story in this great series, I hope to read more soon! I've put you on my favorites list, thought you ought to know.

dreamingfifi

P.S. Don't leave me hanging for too long!!