That was the greatest story I ever read!

Lets see good story, grammar great, punctuation is good, there's a plot going on.Out of six stars I'd give it a *.See my bio if you want to know what that means.

In almost 115 reviews, I don't think that I've ever done one based on Sonic the Comic. Cool. Somewhat interesting, though the mechanics need some work.

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Nice one. I was also thinking of putting Cream in a fleetway fic, maybe making her a relative of Johnny's. What d'ya reckon? Yes? No? Maybe?

Nice. Theres a few confusing grammar errors but thats the only mistake I see, please continue.