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ForgetItAgain
2008-07-30 . chapter 1
Gah Poor Seto! Gozaburo is a **. It was really sweet how Seto is so readily willing to be hurt for mokuba. Though sad.
inu-youkai 911
2005-07-27 . chapter 14
^__^ Very nice story I loved it, Well just wanted to say that ^^()...
Relinquished
2004-02-24 . chapter 14
i wanted to ask...what about Kendi or whatever his name was? don't DO that!!
don't mention a character, have us think that he's gonna be in love with Ryou, then forget about him and not mention him for the rest of the story!!
oh yeah, btw, gr8 fic
Relinquished
Wildwolf
2003-12-26 . chapter 14
**twitches** Kami-sama, I was so damn worried~! **falls to ground and convulses**
Anywho! Yo! Long time, no read! Gomen, gomen! **bows** Nice ending, but sad. Why~? Whywhywhywhywhy? I mean, I know it was in your power to kill him and I should be thankful you didn't, but why~?
**sniffles** At laest they're still together and happy. ^.^
Ja!
6Arence
2003-12-15 . chapter 14
AH!
That CANNOT be the end...(But it made me cry anyway T-T)
I just love this histori, this is my REAL mail
belle_destiny@hotmail.com
could you write me and recomend me some storys??
Please.
ATT: your #2 fan ( the numbre 1 must be somebody who has read ALL your fics...and that is not me T-T)
Satire Central
2003-12-02 . chapter 14
;.; That was such a beautiful way to end this wonderful story! It was amazing! You chose your characterizations, kept things consitant, and had fun with your plot =D Truly an amazing story that brings a bit of a tear to my eye...though you did make it sound like he died at first!! ;.;
What about Kendi though? Does Kendi burn in hell? ^^; Sorry, just seems to be a loose end that bothers me because I'm strange like that...
Truly another AMAZING work to add to your collection!
Always and forever,
~Talentless
Youko Duet
2003-11-30 . chapter 14
Sad, yet cute. ^_^ It was a good fic.
wynturchylde
2003-09-18 . chapter 13
NO! Let Ryou wake up!! *sobbs* UPDATE SOON
C.o.M.
pixy stixs
2003-09-14 . chapter 12
UPDATE! Ra commands you!
lazure
2003-08-31 . chapter 12
more please i'm hanging here. oh well i'll just go read your other stories.come on update i'm begging please pretty please!
Satire Central
2003-08-17 . chapter 12
Well it certainly would be a twist if they got killed for their date...though I'm not sure if it would make much sense...

Yes, I like how this is building up...really wonderful update!

Always and forever,
~Talentless
wynturchylde
2003-08-17 . chapter 12
car accident, maybe? Or is ryou Just gonna lean over and kiss him? Update Soon!
C.o.M.
Jaycek Ruythven
2003-08-16 . chapter 12
Your story rules! When in doubt, kill things >)
wynturchylde
2003-08-13 . chapter 11
Oh koolers!! Update soon!! where is Seto going to take Ryou?
C.o.M.
InSaNe KeYbLaDeR
2003-08-07 . chapter 11
Please update soon. I can't wait until the next chapter
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