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| inu-youkai 911 2005-07-27 ch 14,  | abuse^__^ Very nice story I loved it, Well just wanted to say that ^^()... |
| Relinquished 2004-02-24 ch 14, | abusei wanted to ask...what about Kendi or whatever his name was? don't DO that!! don't mention a character, have us think that he's gonna be in love with Ryou, then forget about him and not mention him for the rest of the story!! oh yeah, btw, gr8 fic Relinquished |
| Wildwolf 2003-12-26 ch 14, anon. | abuse**twitches** Kami-sama, I was so damn worried~! **falls to ground and convulses** Anywho! Yo! Long time, no read! Gomen, gomen! **bows** Nice ending, but sad. Why~? Whywhywhywhywhy? I mean, I know it was in your power to kill him and I should be thankful you didn't, but why~? **sniffles** At laest they're still together and happy. ^.^ Ja! |
| 6Arence 2003-12-15 ch 14, | abuseAH! That CANNOT be the end...(But it made me cry anyway T-T) I just love this histori, this is my REAL mail belle_destiny@hotmail.com could you write me and recomend me some storys?? Please. ATT: your #2 fan ( the numbre 1 must be somebody who has read ALL your fics...and that is not me T-T) |
| Satire Central 2003-12-02 ch 14, | abuse;.; That was such a beautiful way to end this wonderful story! It was amazing! You chose your characterizations, kept things consitant, and had fun with your plot =D Truly an amazing story that brings a bit of a tear to my eye...though you did make it sound like he died at first!! ;.; What about Kendi though? Does Kendi burn in hell? ^^; Sorry, just seems to be a loose end that bothers me because I'm strange like that... Truly another AMAZING work to add to your collection! Always and forever, ~Talentless |
| Youko Duet 2003-11-30 ch 14, anon. | abuseSad, yet cute. ^_^ It was a good fic. |
| wynturchylde 2003-09-18 ch 13, | abuseNO! Let Ryou wake up!! *sobbs* UPDATE SOON C.o.M. |
| pixy stixs 2003-09-14 ch 12, anon. | abuseUPDATE! Ra commands you! |
| lazure 2003-08-31 ch 12, anon. | abusemore please i'm hanging here. oh well i'll just go read your other stories.come on update i'm begging please pretty please! |
| Satire Central 2003-08-17 ch 12, | abuseWell it certainly would be a twist if they got killed for their date...though I'm not sure if it would make much sense... Yes, I like how this is building up...really wonderful update! Always and forever, ~Talentless |
| wynturchylde 2003-08-17 ch 12, | abusecar accident, maybe? Or is ryou Just gonna lean over and kiss him? Update Soon! C.o.M. |
| Jaycek Ruythven 2003-08-16 ch 12, | abuseYour story rules! When in doubt, kill things >) |
| wynturchylde 2003-08-13 ch 11, | abuseOh koolers!! Update soon!! where is Seto going to take Ryou? C.o.M. |
| InSaNe KeYbLaDeR 2003-08-07 ch 11, | abusePlease update soon. I can't wait until the next chapter |
| Satire Central 2003-08-06 ch 11, | abuseOh!! I've missed so much! Wonderful, excellent, lovely!! It sucks when the good authors get reported...I usually over rate mine, and when people tell me that, I simply go with what they say...because I am a pushover. You have an interesting love triangle you could play with! I've never seen anyone use the sob story for Seto, then keep him that way the entire story. Very good. It also is a little bit of conflict! I hope you update again soon! Always and forever, ~Talentless |