Wah! Now I'm depressed. This was so well-written.

*shrug, applaud* Not bad.

Wow...
Beautiful and tragic, love it, don't change!

this fic left off on a bitterseet tune.
If you can draw as well as ou can write. make a doujinshi.

Ohh. That's so heartbreaking, so uplifting, and so angsty at the same time! I love it. But, was the other pair of eyes Raiel's? I really liked the end line, "Why can't you forget?" Very nice.
~Miiko

I thought this was just fine, there's no need to change it. Its really really sad, but meaningful!