WHY DID YOU STOP?!?!?!?!? This is good, and less cliche than you'd expect.

i think u should continue in another story!

so awesome

Gah! Must. Have. More. Story. Please. Help. Send. Update. STAT!

Thanks for the great read and please, please, continue it soon. I love the way the story is progressing, and your dialogue is great!

Hey! Come back here!

You NEED to write more of this !

Thorough,concise,and well written.A touch too emotionally bare for Lex.However,since my daughter introduced me to Smallville I've often wondered how much of a genuine brotherhood these two could actually have.This is a great starting point for a "what if this happened,Then what would their friendship evolve to?" That if their friendship continued to deepen they would make a most unbeatable team.I should like to hear more of this story.

Impressive! Please continue! :D

oh this is going good :D keep it up!

WOW! Is Clark's dad going to be mad!

But who cares! Make more and now!

Please?

I like this :) curious as to where you will take it.

Hm. Interesting. I would like to see where this will go. Keep Going

it is really good so far, keep it coming

YEA HAVE HIM FIND OUT KEEP GOING

This is very well written. I can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Very cool! Please continue!