Reviews for The Silver Senshi

Reviews For: The Silver Senshi

LOTUSNEKO 2003-03-18 ch 9,	abuseA story as excellent as this deserves to be perfect. "redish" should be 'reddish.' "chackled" (LOL!) should be either 'cackled,' or 'chuckled.'
LOTUSNEKO 2003-03-18 ch 7,	abuseWonderful, wonderful. You let your characters say so much with so little. For example, when Beatrix says "things could have been different if". . .and then trails off with a shrug. One correction you need to make is instead of "I may have sired you with my first husband," it should be "My first husband may have sired you." The act of siring, or impregnating can only be done by a man. It cannot be done in conjunction with a woman.
LOTUSNEKO 2003-03-04 ch 2,	abuseAwesome, amazing. You have a wonderful imagination and are skilled at bringing it to life. One question: what is a "glaive?"
LOTUSNEKO 2003-03-03 ch 1,	abuseWow! I never would have thought this was your first fanfic. I love it!
Drifter Chick 2003-02-28 ch 3,	abuseI love this story you simply must continue! but its so mean that you have so few reviews its such a great story.
wingnut 2003-02-28 ch 8, anon.	abusewingnut: nods Nice. Minerva: If short. Still, not bad. not bad at all.
Tuxedo Starr 2003-02-27 ch 7, anon.	abuseOOh! I love it I love it I LOVE IT! smiles happy dances I like this story so much! It is very neat (even though I have a terrible bias against the original senshi being shown up strengthwise, but hey, that's just me!). The plot is cool, I'm just enjoying everything so far, and I know what it feels like to get a review! I also like that you update so fast! Kudos, kudos! Please hurry, I want 2 know what happens!
jessi 2003-02-27 ch 4, anon.	abuseCool chapter. I cant wait read the other ones. Keep up the good work!!^_^l
StArRy-EyEz07 2003-02-25 ch 1,	abuseHey! I think this story is awesome. Little mistakes here and there, but nothing major. If I could suggest something? Um, try making your summary a little more detail included.but leave enough out so people come in to read the story. I know it's really tough writing a Sew Senshi story (cuz ppl don't like the idea of new senshi)and I think you're really brave for doing that! Keep up the good work! Starry*Eyez07
wingnut 2003-02-24 ch 6, anon.	abusewingnut: I just noticed the name of an attack was wrong. Good job. Arianrod: . I suppose. The orb's clouded. wingnut: ARI!! Arianrod: Just kidding, I didn't look. Leas: I'd be thinking about running. Really. Arianrod: eyes widen You're right. runs Minerva: Now this is fun!
wingnut 2003-02-24 ch 5, anon.	abusewingnut: Geez, Beatrix sure is tough, ne? There's just a couple of small mistakes. but it's a good story, really! smiles Minerva: holding a greatsword threateningly Smile and nod, people. smile and nod.

Return to Top