*beats Dilan with a shovel*
LEAVE QUI-GON ALONE!

Oh, wow. It's finally finished. What can I say? Beautifully done. I love the portrayal of Qui in here...
Gorgeous, absolutely gorgeous.
Lady Miir

*cries wildly* oh my goodness, the end!

No, seriously, I am choking up a bit. I'm going to miss this story so much, it's been such a great ride. This is definitely my favorite fic on the web of all time. Honestly, I dunno how you did it. Huge fic, all written out as a diary/first person limited, and yet you kept *all* characters in beautifully character, the action crazy intense and cliffhangery, and a complex plot all spinning in order.

Mad skill, Sarah.

Aw, I really am going to miss this fic like crazy. I guess I can read it again, but, but...it was so nice to look forward to a new chapter, and be all excited! Are you thinking of writing anything else in the SWs fandom anytime soon? I suppose you deserve a break after this masterpiece...(actually, you probably deserve a trophy or something too) but, um, if you're ever writing any sequels, follow-ups or viggies... be sure to let me know. ^_^

*waves Making flag wildly*

Oman. O.o the temple!! deja vu, much? I knew we'd see Dilan again, but aw, that's so scary! I love Dook and Yoda saving Qui. Oh, and Tahl! ^_^ You write, seriously, *the* best Tahl out there. She's perfectly in character, but yet so original and...ah, perfect! but the end?! Okay, there's another chapter thingie, reading that now...

I'm glad this is finished because, frankly, I was getting sick of the way it dragged on. Apart from that, I heartily enjoyed it though I would have liked to encounter Obi-Wan at some stage. This was a great read. Thank you.

wow, the fic is finally over, that is sad.

Oh, wow, Sarah. Every time you update it makes my day, seriously. *sigh* This is *such* a good story.

Oh, the cave! *Very* interesting about the prophecy and all. Oh, lol, and for some reason Tahl in a bad mood was really amusing to me. :) Just how Qui put it. And I dunno why, but I don't trust Vulna...I kept waiting for them to come back to camp and him to be all *darkside!!* I like the way this chapter is written, more stream of conscious-y than some of the other ones, like Qui's a bit confused by all of this. Very nicely done!! More soon? :) *hopeful smiles*

yay - more of this story. now keep on feeding me...lol

OH MY GOSH! SARAH! *squeals, literally, out loud*
Well, I wasn't going to review right away cos it's like 7 am and I'm about to be late for school but after reading this I HAVE to! Oh, oh, so awesome!! Your writing style/form is as beautiful as ever, and aw!! Poor Tahl!! Qui's captured?! :O Oh, you have to update. Please please please please? Because, now it's a big cliffhanger, and those aren't nice! Pleease? *whimper*
One of your best chappies, I'd say. I like this 'angry Qui' you write, Miss Sarah. :)I love the offhand comment about Dooku probably off starting an argument somewhere...lol, very nicely done, the whole thing, and now comes more loud demands for more. :D pretty please? soon? Update?

great story!

huh? finish the story. NOW!

*gasp* OH NO~ things are certainly getting twisted, aw, poor Qui! That's so terrible, but very cool. :) I've missed this fic so much, is awesome to see an update! Lovely writing, as usual, aw, and you write them all so wonderfully in character, but their actions are still a surprise...I don't know if that makes sense. (blames being sick) But, like, with this fic the characters are totally as they would be, like you can see the character saying/doing whatever, but then on the other hand, it's never predictable or tiresome. Anyway, I love it. Great to see an update, and this one was so awesome!

Oh no! Amiri's dead? *sobs* Say it ain't so... And what's up with Mapru? He kinda reminded me of my Syfo-Dias,though I'm not completely sure why. Poor Quiggs... life always seems to get more complicated for him, doesn't it? At least he still has Tahl. And his master. At least, I hope his master's still there for him.

Great stuff - keep it up!

great chapter

Aw they finally got to go home! I didn't realize you'd updated three chapters in one go :d Yay! Great job with the whole Childor thing that was really well done :)