aww this story was gerat I really loved reading it... You have to write a sequal XD.

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Cute! Light and fun to read. Thanks!

omg i love this fanfic. it's so unique, but still pretty in character. especially love how serius & snape fight.

hehe, that was cute. i really enjoyed it and i'm looking forward to reading more of your stories. great job!

that was nothing. i've read more explicit stuff here. people need to stop reporting stories for content unless it's rated incorrectly. i mean, if you had this rated as k, that'd be a whole different story. it was good. well done and i am loving your story.

wow. we were never that much trouble when we went on trips. then again, we were threatened with expulsion, not just a silly detention. maybe try switching gears a little to make them behave? great chapter!

cool. i want to try that sort of thing next time i visit a museum. "where'd the person go?" hehe, or the next time i'm in a department store. "where do you keep the owls?" "i'm looking for color changing nail polish." "what happens when i push this button?" hehehe, i'm plotting.

alright, i'll settle with a point. good chapter. i wonder if hermione will tell severus off for being so strict with the students? not like it would work, but just curious.

he either smashed his fingers in a fold-out ironing board or a suitcase stand. i think it's the suitcase stand. anyway, great chapter!

Good story.

sweet deals, awesome story

This story is really great so far. The incident with the fire was great. Snape's line about hoping it was a coincidence was too much cracked me up. But the end of this chapter is a little too raunchy. I'm not going to report you or anything, but maybe you should put a short warning at the top of the page because it is a little too graphic. I'm not sure if it is NC-17 or not though. Onto chapter 7. . .

oh that was good! too good!

very good so far, too tired to read the restright now, think ive already read it before, goodnight.

That was a great challenge (this is not the first story answering it that I read) and you've done a great job!

Really funny... and thanks for not making Sirius/Remus pairing... I don't like my Remmie being gay ;)