plz plz update soon... i would really love jake whump so how about jake gets into an accident or some thing really bad happens to him and melanie realizes that that she could lose jake and that brings all her emotions to the fore...

Iy has been 5 years and u still havent updated that is pretty SAD

LOVED IT UPDATE SOON

Hmm... For one... you said that there would be more chapters to come and it's been what? Almost 2 years? And, if I may make a suggestion... you could try to put your work in paragraphs and maybe add a bit more detail instead of just dialogue. Anyway, if you ever do come back to this, it would be a very interesting story indeed!

oh that's so sad, i hope you update soon because i wanna read the rest...but somehow i'm thinking you won't, ahh well, cya later.

i would love for you to continue this but i think perhaps you could work on your formating ...?

this is awesome, hope there's more!

Mandi

Well, it was kinda hard to read. Do you think next time you could use paragraphs and gaps?

It was a very short chapter but you got a good plot line. Maybe you could just expand on it?

Ilove this story! please finish it!

Is this alternative universe, or is it what happened before? Either way, its good! :)

This was the best sweet home alabama story i ve ever read! I love it! Please continue!

bi

shona

more more more more more! please! more!

I liked the part about the boy named Kyle! He seems so sweet! I think he should be nominated for a global award! That is my advice from .

THANKS BYE!

Very good. It shows some potential. I'd love to see a continuation.

Its great. One of the best ones yet. Write more or another story bout the baby. I always wanted some1 to write a fic including the baby even when they were young. Well see-ya!_