Man oh man wasn't expecting that one lol, would love to see another chapter to this, It isn't quite finished yet, liked it, keep up the good work

O this is god!! I doubt you'll update it, but it would be nice if you did. It's REALLY good!! Well not so much written, as the way the charecter's emotions seem so real and deep, not to mention the fact that I can't wait to see what happends ^^

I may not know much about that Kuno line but, hey it sounds correct. lol. good story though, u should know this is the second fic like this i have read, and well the plots were way different. Thumbs up for origionality.

Nice, please upgrade this story.

0_0 Sweet Jesus, Mary, and Joseph... That... was great. I don't much care for rape or dark fics, but it was done with such mastery... I can't possibly begin to say how impressed I am with your work.

With great respect and admiration, Night Hunter

the story ends a little early

oh gosh that's weird!

Very dark. Well written and strange. I would have prefered more of an ending tho'

Leave WFROSE out of this, as in my opinion, he is the NEXT 'Dark Phoenix', as in, he starts LOADS of fanfics, and never finishes one (that reminds me, I should start uploading those completed chapters.anyway)
Nice fic, I like the bit of comedy you put in at the end with the red head not being able to find the door, but I agree with the Ryouga fans (I'm a Ranko fan myself) he shouldn't be bastardised in such away, come on, even if he did get with a woman, he'd die from nose bleeds (hmm.maybe he should be with Konatsu, as one hint of intimacy leads to.) Anyway, whoever continues this, give Ranma a good life in the end, 'she' deserves it.
See ya later

Heh. This "story" seems more like an open request for someone to take up the challenge of actually writing a complete story using the concepts layed out in "Ranma Plus Ryouga." God knows the author who wrote R+R hasn't updated his story in over two years, so there's really no chance of it ever being completed. In fact, if I had to hazard a guess, I'd say that the author of that fic was actually hunted down and killed by Arhicks, for his slight against Ryouga's character. :)
Which brings up one of the main reasons no one's ever bothered to write a fic like this, the rabid Ryouga fanbase. These people are hardcore, and I'm actually shocked that your story hasn't raised their ire.
Of course the other reason no one's written anything like this to conclusion is that it's grossly out of character for Ryouga to rape Ranma, and the characterization serves little purpose outside of shock value.Hmm.Maybe you should ask WFROSE to write the followup.

Interesting story and very well written. Of course I'd have prefered a happy ending say Guren-ko talks Akane out of commiting suicide and she gets back together with Ranma but that's just me. I was wondering however if you have the time and interest perhaps you could write an alternate version of this story where Akane arrived on the scene all those years ago instead of the Amazons. So that she not only knew from the begining that Ryouga was the one who raped Ranma but also she was the one who helped Ranma rebuild his life?

Damn. I read your summary, and I was hoping for so much more from this fic. It sounded like there would be a bit more drama or suspense in the plot, but you went right for the main plot point from the beginning.

You're right, though. This definitely isn't a new concept, but it's also not the best written one, either. Below are some issues I had with your story, address them or not as is your will.

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[Akane] answered the door to see a young girl of about sixteen look up at her.

"Excuse me for bothering you this morning, but are you Tendo Akane?"

"Yes, I'm Akane, but the name is Hibiki now."

"I'm sorry to have bothered you Hibiki san. I won't trouble you further."

Suddenly Akane realized, "Wait! You're Ranma Saotome's daughter aren't you?"
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How did Akane come to realize this? Because a stranger knocked on her door? It doesn't make sense.

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Of course the fact that his good luck was simply a manifestation of Ranma's bad would have only added one more thing to blame Ranma for if Ryouga had known.
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Why would Ryoga blame Ranma for giving him *good* luck?

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Suddenly from nowhere and idea came to him. the ultimate humiliation on Ranma.
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Right. I call it Conveniant Plot Device combined with Out Of Character(ization). CPD+OOC=Start_Over.

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Guren-ko looked over to Akane and grinned bashfully with a hand behind her head. "Sorry, I thought I'd found the right door."

Akane dropped to the floor and began to sob. Her whole life was revealed for the lie it was by that last bit of evidence.
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What evidence? You mean that Guren-ko went through the kitchen door? We (the readers) don't even know if she really was trying to find the door, or if she was just 'getting lost' on purpose. After all, she not only found the Tendo Dojo, but she also found the back door in the kitchen without any trouble, assistance, or prior knowledge, at all.

So, is the tanto for Ryoga? It better be.

pretty good

IS IT A COMPLETED FIC??

You have a very good story here. You can continue it.

Kinai.

P.S: The last phrase mean that Akane is going to kill herself?