Ah, actually this was quite brilliantly done. It fits pretty much seamlessly into the original storyline, and the characters remain SO in-character that it's exhilerating. I feel like I'm reading a long-lost part of Gravitation's story, something that the publishers forgot to print. It's fantastic. ^_^

-Kayura

I know this is random, but I just have to say it before going on to the next chapter: nice fix on the gravestone. I know damn well it said "I hope to heaven his soul IS gone," which is a grammatical lulz that could last for HOURS. ^__^ And well done on the story, too. I've faved it.

this is amazing! i luve it! and i especially love shuichi's reactions to the books, very appropriate! please continue

you're a ridiculously good writer. these were so good; i loved pretty much everything about them.

When will you update? I would really appreciate it.

I thought this story was a very unique idea. I've not read a story that integrated Eiri's writing, and I thought it was very well done. I thought the third part was a little strange. . . out of place, I suppose, but the overall story was beautiful.
~Wanderer

I really liked this story. It was short and sweet. Cute and well written. It was kinda fun to see some of Eiri's writing for once. :D That was an awesome idea. Awesome story!

Jeez, dude. So angsty. ^^ I love it. It's relaly nice how you put a lil bit of YUki's past in this. I swear..you could publish this..if only the character were yours. Please update soon ne?

That was like..the most beautiful scene ever! ^^ I love how you displayed all the character. Your grammar is superb. As my english teacher would say. ^^

AH! *dies* This is one of the best ficcies ever written!

Aw, this chappy's depressing again. ;_;

Next chappy will be happy-funny, yes? Yes-yes-yes?

(Nah, nothing against angst. I like it, really. But my life is too messed up to read too much angst, or else I'll start doing weird things.)

*squeals* RYUICHI! ^_^

Heehee, that was certainly interesting. What, no mobs of rabid fangirls chasing after them? ^_~ (Note to self: Baseball caps are VERY good disguises. *giggles*)

Wai, I'm hyper now. I have just inherited Shu-Chan and Ryu-Chan's energy... O.O

E, Grav fic! *bouncebounce*

Aw, ish all depressing... ;_;

Oh, you know, "Yuki" means "snow"? (Yea, you probably do know. That's why you picked this title, right? ^^')

This fic was very well written, not to mention I loved the way you portrayed Yuki and Shuu's relationship togehter.

Personally I think chapter three was the best chapter of all, but then I've always been a sucker for angst.

Hee hee, Shuichi just skips to the last book. ^^ This was so good! Please write more soon!

~firedraygon97