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   Lanerose 6/18/03 . chapter 12Interesting story. - However, you have an inconsistency in this chapter. In chapter 7, when Harry's visiting the Weasleys, you wrote, “What are you doing here, little bro?” Charlie asked, hugging him tightly. “I’m here as the guest for the summer, before University.” Then, in this chapter, you said that he had no idea who Charlie was. Might want to fix that. Also, I'm not sure I understand the title - it sounded as though he wound up having a decent life - how is it not worth wanting? Keep writing, though! |
| Kemenran 6/17/03 . chapter 13 what happens now? moe please. |
| Limited Edition 6/17/03 . chapter 13 *grabs box of tissues* *SOB* you made me cry! this fic is so amazing and it is way under appreciated! *abruptly stops crying, getting out a megaphone* ALL HAIL THE DEMON-CHILD WRITER! *bows* lol! sequel! yay? |
| Limited Edition 6/1/03 . chapter 12 yes, very happy. *puffs out chest proudly* lmao. this chapter was great! I almost cried cause it was touching with the little girl an all, but *sobs* WHY OH WHY ONE MORE CHAPTER? *wails sadly* type more again, please! lmao Xirleb70 |
| Kemenran 6/1/03 . chapter 12 What happens now? More please. |
| Child-of-the-Dawn 5/25/03 . chapter 11 *wails* That succks! *hugs Harry* update soon! |
| Limited Edition 5/24/03 . chapter 11 I order you to type type type and update NOW! *laughs evilly* please update! Xirleb70 amazing chapter |
| Kemenran 5/24/03 . chapter 11 More please. |
| Brieanna 5/22/03 . chapter 10 im just making a suggestion but plez dont put song lyrics in stoprys... they make me think there is a lot written but there wasnt really anything there... and just wondering... how old is Ali? and the twin girls... are they gonna be in the story later? lol. well anyway plez check out my story... Hermione's Fate |
| Limited Edition 5/20/03 . chapter 10 its okay. I most definitely am keeping my AU story up but the other story isgetting to be tedious to write. I finally updated and will do so asap! |
| Child-of-the-Dawn 5/20/03 . chapter 10 You know, he'd look really cool in that. Hmn...keep up the good work! |
| Kemenran 5/20/03 . chapter 10 More please. |
| Alexandria2 5/11/03 . chapter 9 Niffty! that was neato i like the whole Duke idea please continue! |
| Child-of-the-Dawn 5/11/03 . chapter 9 Never saw this coming...oh well, I like it. update soon! |
| Kemenran 5/11/03 . chapter 9 The chapter is a little odd near the end. But it's great to see a new chapter up. What will happen now? |
