^_^ I just loved that story! Especially how you characterized Dilandau-sama! I'm so jealous of your masterful skill! Also, yours was an original character that wasn't very Mary-Sue-ish! I applaud your efforts with her!

Thanks for writing this and keep writing!

Another Cat Girl

That was a great fic!! It gave me a warm fuzzy feeling! I hope you post more fics soon!! I really enjoy 'em! Merry Christmas, Bahumbug!

Oh wow. that was so...beautiful. There was a perfect atmosphere of sorrow, adventure, and mystery. That was beyond words. The ending was rather sad, seeing them die. One knows they must after time, but one doesn't like to think of that.

I must congratulate you. You have written a truely touching story. I love it.

All three halves(VDG,GG,CL): *aplaud* *whistle* BRAVO!
GG(Gatti'sGal): awsome! i liked it a lot
CL(ChestaLover): thats a lot comin from u. lol. i liked it a lot 2.
VDG(ME!^^): same thing as my other halves. and we don't always agree, so thats' sayin somin. ;_; *sob* poor DragonSlayers. they were givin such a cruel fate! *gives each and every 'Slayer(even the nameless 1's), a flower, and a medal* ^_^ they will always live on in our hearts.
GG, CL: even though they didn't die! ^_^ they had clones. *giggle* 'Slayers rule!
All 3: Ja Ne! we luved the story, and we will always luv the DragonSlayers!

WOW! Surprising! I like the ending! Original! Great job!!

O.O Oh my. That was a GOOD chapter! Wow. I mean wow. Go Sage. I hope they listen to her.at least I hope some of them listen to her. Dilandau won't die, will he? Please no?
Excellent job! I love it! And no, Sage isn't really a mary sue. Most mary sues are good at swordsmanship. Please update soon!

I have had a crappy day but reading ur story makes me feel a hell lot more better!^^It's great u know that and well hope the boyz will be OK

aw. Only 3 more chapters?!?!?? Oh well, I gues I'll just have to find a different fic to read. just joking!! Don't worry!! I'm a loyal fan!! I won't abandon ya. not just yet. [I'm joking!] Anyways a great and wonderful chappie! Are you really going to kill the Dragon Slayers in the next chappie?! No wait, I've already answered my own question. ONLY FOUR IS GONNA LIVE! OH VHY? VHY? VHY MUST SUCH HORRIBLE THINGS MUST HAPPEN?! [I know I spelled "why" wrong!! Damn people and grammar!!] Oh well, i'm gonna go and play DDR [Dance Dance Revoltuion!!] I may be not good but at least I can get a pretty good score! Merry Christmas!!




.::`*~-.+WaTaShIwA ShInImEgAmI+.-~*`::.

aw. Another cliffhanger?! I swear this kid! Stop with the cliffhangers! It's driving me insane! Ir ead over at least 20 stories today and all of 'em and I mean ALL of them ended with a cliffhanger! I swear! What is up with this!? Anyways. is Sage and Gatti gonna pair up or is it Miguel and Sage? Guess I'll have to wait and see er. read?? Merry Christmas and HAPPY MARCH BREAK! YA! NO SKOOL FOR ONE WEEK! SWEET! ^_^!

Hey! Very interesting fic you've got here. n_n I know *I* was upset when they died in the series, too. ;__;
Hope you get the next chapter out soon! I've got to know how you save her. cuz surely you wouldn't kill off the protagonist so soon! That would just be silly. :)

U spelled my name wrong!! It's a "g" not a "d". Bak 2 your fic.

ONLY FOUR?!?!?! FOUR?! WHY??! WHY?! THE HORRORS! Who's going to live?!?! I already have an idea. Miguel, *Miguel grins and cheers* *other Dragon Slayers glare at Miguel* and that's all I know sadly. *other Dragon Slayers pout unknown of their fate*

*WAtAShIwA ShInImEgAmI grabs all the Dragon Slayers and starts crying* Why do you have to kill them?!!?!! Why?!! Why?!! *lets go of them*

Oh well, I'll just print out several copies of the chappie they die in and burn it page by page slowly and pretend the chappie never exsited. Then I'll throw darts at van's, hitomi's, allen's and zongi's pictures or I can always make vodo dolls and stick needles in them.

Oh well, great chappie from the one and only [I hope none of this is going to your head. Too much flatter can be a bad thing.] Although I hated how all {or at least the evils ones} [Including me] make the ending a cliffhanger!! It makes me want more! Well I gotta go! PLEASE DON'T KILL CHESTA! *glomps Chesta*

Very captivating introduction. Nicely done. I saw a few errors but you used a variety of vocabulary. However, I disagree with your opinion on the amount of DS romance fics. it's nice to know there are fans out there who aren't blinded by the whole Van/Hitomi peachy scenario and I enjoy reading their work. I myself have two DS fics. one of them is highly popular if I would bother posting more frequently. I'm going to continue reading. Ja. -CrimsonFire

Thanks for telling me about the what a Mary Sue is and another great chapter as well. Keep up the good work.

Just finished chapter three and although im not really sure what you mean about Sage being a Mary Sue (Someone please explain this to me cause i've seen other storys mention the name) but if being a Mary Sue basicaly means she's a bad character then i would have to say no she isent a Mary Sue and she seems to be a decent character from what youve described about her so far.

I really like this story--Write more!^^