its a good story keep it going!

Nice nice nice! i like it much! Please continue the good work and update soon!

Nikki

Very good! i noticed a few mistakes. One, they get their letter's for prefects fifth year and i do believe you mentioned this was their sixth year. *shrug* i might have misread it or gotten this confused, so i apologize if that is wrong. Umm..another one...oh what was it? damnit! lol! Well, one of them was James would not tell Lily that he was a marauder. It was a secret that Remus was a werewolf after all and stating that they were marauder's would sort of give that away. The map was secret for a reason *grins* Umm...there was one more but i really can't remember it *sob* OH! I do believe James was the seeker on the Gryffindor team, so maybe she should be a chaser or something like that. *smiles* Neways, i absolutely loved this fic. I loved the relationships that you created, especially the fact that James, Remus, and Sirius (where is Peter?) were called the enemy. Nice! And aw...James likes Lily, doesn't he? And if i am not mistaken, so does a certain Severus Snape. Hm. I loved the characters, very cool. They seem like nice bunch *grins* I am thinking that you may have written this before the 5th book was released because, accoring to the 5th book, James is out of character. Sirius is dead on tho! *grins* well, i must go read the next chapter! See ya in a minute.

Nikki

remus was the prefect!

o0o0o Good start!

Hello, :)
yay, new chapter. A new kid, that should be interesting. This story is coming along great. write more please. I like the charaters, their personalities are great, and when are you going to get rid of siris' girlfriend, she's only been in here what twice, and she's already annoing (but she also could add interesting twists to the story?) anyway, great fic, keep it up! ;P
-Lily Skylo
s_lil_4sky_orli@hotmail.com

It's great! I'm sending some suggestions on e-mail, so you'll get my full opinion and stuff, but so far, it's pretty good.
Alicorn 8)

PLEASE WRITE MORE!

this is a great story, i love it. i hope you post more really soon so i can read more.

Nice. I especially liked the Sorting Hat's song. E-mail me when you update!

~Luna

now girl at hogwarts...hm...what could this mean? oh, and i LOVED the part where everyone was shouting that Sirius was sexy...i REALLY wished i could have beein there to see the look on Severus Snape's face...e-mail me when the next chapter's up, ok?

Pure Venom

Kool!! I love this story!! I love Sirius! (I'm such a Sirius fanatic!!) Please write more soon.

Hello, :)
thats it? when r u goin to write more??... its really good so far, i hope that you continue with it. I want to read more!
-Lily Skylo
s_lil_4sky_orli@hotmail.com

great story! i luv MWPP! email me when the next chapteris up, ok?
Pure Venom
*Poison For The Mind*

Really great story :)
I can't wait to see what you make of it :)
Please have Sirius and Gwen break up asap :(

Hope you can check my story too :)