nice!

i luv the poem it is so awsome!

hm... not too bad. methinks the speaker could do with a lil of Darkside's "renewal" _ of course, it bein a poem, it wasnt very character-specific. more like "in the style of" DB... moody and all that *shrugs* but anyway, i like it _ gets the ol noodle cookin, as they say. id like to see more from you, but i hafta go now XD homework and such, and im not even at home lol long bike ride ahead... -_-() oh well. more Darkside ficcies please?

no.

just no.

not Darkside Blues. some emo poetry maybe.

I'm not sure what, if anything, this poem has in common with Darkside Blues. As far as poems go, I guess it's okay. I didn't really get anything from it. Perhaps it means more to you. I have a few poems like that over on You should try writing poetry that doesn't rhyme. Or, you could go out and buy a rhyming dictionary, and that might help you find words that are more fitting. Anyway, not everyone is going to like your work, but you should be writing for yourself anyway, and not others. Keep trying and you'll always improve.

Midnightingale

This was great! The niece part made you wonder, instead of seeming stupid.

Okay, this song was kind of... stupid... "we go and choose our certain mate"? We're not dogs, you know. The line about wine and mates were STUPID, but the rest of this was SO great! "Just get aboard that hell-bound bus."

ur very good at writing i cant see what ur trying to tell a reader if anything. dont get me wrong i like it a lot because its differnet i just cant see it. maybe im blind to it and just don't know but hey anything is possible.
-rebecca

keep it up! loved it (-)

Depressing, but good!

OK,I'm new to this so somebody is going to have to fill me in. My e-mail adress is .

Intense. Like it.
Great work.

This a great fic so far update soon!

Some of the rhymes here are good, others make it seem that you're trying too hard. Try again _!

This would be a GREAT poem... without the rhyming. Rhyming is immature in this case.

Darkside Blues is one of my faves… I'm glad someone finally wrote about it. I like these poems; they're cool. Remember, they don't always have to rhyme. I'm just wondering whose point of view this is from. Keep writing! _