I love your story! I like how Muraki sees the world and the people close to him. It made for a very excellent read!

Thank you!

Wow. This story was amazing. I spent all weekend reading instead of studying for exams lol. The writing was amazing. Hisoka's parts were probably my favorite, I love how you wrote from his perspective. The parts with Terazuma and Wakaba were adorable. I thoroughly enjoyed every minute reading this!

Wow, what a perfect ending for this chapter. I just want to live in it.

This was an awesome story. It was well written and had an awesome plot. I've been reading this fic all night and I couldn't stop reading until the end.

my ass is sore from sitting this long, but it was more than worth it. this was such an amazing story. *tears of happiness* and it has the best pairings ever! we really need more Terazuma+Wakaba goodness around here...

This was a great read! ^^

I get to be your 100th review, cos I'm your biggest fan. Ha-haa.

^^ Love you sweetie. I've been downloading your fics to keep me entertained after the internet room shuts down. I miss you!

Very good use of language. quite poetic. there are especially a few sentences that i like. the plot is good, despite a little confusing at this point, but i like your pairings. somehow i've taken a strange liking to Oriya. anyway, Ganbatte ne!

Yay! The epilogue, finally. Meant to read it earlier, but was robbed of time.

I like this. This is a nice way to wrap up the story. It starts out very light, and for a while I thought it was gonna stay like that until the end. You know, to balance out the heavy story in the former chapters, I suppose?

But, hmm.. how do I put it? It's like a... line graph. one that goes up and down and then back again. That's how it felt, reading this. Quite frankly, I don't understand what the first half of this epilogue had to do with the last half, but at least there was a good story to more than cover it up. Everything was pretty easy to read, nothing too submerging, except for, well, Tatsumi's parts.

Speaking of which, I wonder, though, why Tatasumi isn't written in first POV. And yes, never in my entire 24-hour-day-dream-life have I thought of an uke Tatsumi! I always thought him the epitome of being seme. You proved me wrong. And I liked the character of Sato. It fits very well. :) Doesn't this bit make you want to write a side-story of them + Muraki? *hinthint*

Okay, moving on... Very consistent with verb tenses. Just had to mention that, really, coz I sometimes miss out on this myself. One minute, I'm writing in present-perfect tense, the next, I'm doing past. If you know what I mean, it can be very frustrating in the aftermath.

I enjoyed reading the sidestory and the Payback portion. Really, I was wondering when Terazuma would get to that. ;)

Overall, you've done a bad job at wrapping the story up: IT STILL BEGS FOR A SEQUEL!

Boy, do I sound like a fangirl or what? And, yeah, a belated gong xi fa cai to a brilliant writer. Woof woof!

This is, without doubt, the most excellent story I have ever read. Not fanfiction, I mean STORY, including stuff in the real world. I am putting this on my Fave's list and never taking it off, and if you wouldn't mind, when I have my fansite up and running, I want to link to it on the Yami no Matsuei Literature page. Thank you for this amazing story.

Tomu-Serubou? Is that a Tom Servo reference? ^_^ Anyway, congratulations on completing this wonderful story! I really enjoyed your beautiful writing, excellent characterization, and charming humor. Great job!

^_^ It's even better than I expected. Write more soon.

sugoi!! i read this on a different site and liked it
i'm glad i got to review it, it's such a wonderful fic
you should write more oriya/tatsumi
i like your style

Well lady, that was quite a read! Thank you so much for pointing me this way.
Actually it has been quite a while since I read anything rated below R, because let`s face it, I`m just that shallow, but you kept me interested throughout the whole thing. I don`t even feel like I desperately need for the manga to continue because it is all here, neatly wrapped up with perfect characterizations and all the explanations I could wish for. It suddenly all makes sense! It felt like reading a novel version of the manga. So again, thank you again and I promise I`ll translate as fast as I can ^_-

A poignant story, with a poignant ending and liberally sprinkled with light, wry touches of humor. Lovely work. Will we get to see the epilogue anytime soon?

Found this fic through a recommendation on another website.

Terazuma and Wakaba. *big smile* Those guys never get enough screentime. And you managed to fit everyone in.

I'm too lost for words to give a proper review but I do know one thing. Really love this. The omakes are nice too.