Great job with this fic. I honestly laughed at the final sentences, although i did think for a moment that you would go with the whole "it was a story that someone was reading, none of it ever happened" sort of thing :P

I can honestly say that I never thought the same thing twice while reading this story. I kept flip-flopping, sometimes I liked it, sometimes I didn't, sometimes I was just very confused as to the direction you were taking. There are a bunch of typos. As to the plot, there are several things that you leave unsolved, or you bring them up but then nothing ever comes of them (the cat and Ron mentioning who he really is in front of Ginny, respectively). Then some things you would introduce but, it was as if you lost interest in them so didn't focus on them and let them fade away, so to speak - they just kind of disappeared from the story. As to the epilogue, well, a tad bit disappointing. I mean, the book thing was cool, and Harry and Sev making up was adorably awesome. However, you had Harry running and hiding again. Instead of learning from past mistakes, you have him repeating them. I think it is good, but I wouldn't go to the trouble of rereading it.

lol, that was a cute ending. i've only read one other story that ended as if 'normal' people were reading the story, and this worked way better than it did.

a rather large number of typos near the end, but still a decent read.

well that's logical. i'm seriously **, so i'm going to kiss you. yeah.
eh, entertaining read so far.

You have a good sense of story and a balance between dialogue and action. Good luck and I hope you write more.

I like it. It is a great story. There are writing and/or typing mistakes, but the plot itself is good.

Awesome story, just wish the link to the lemon still worked.

i like nice ending thro a curve ball
didnt see that comin

I quite liked this story, though, to be frank, I found the epilogue to be rather disappointing. It shows almost no progression for Harry, right back where he started, running and hiding. It's like he learned nothing. Also, it seems abrupt, skipping too much time. Aside from the epilogue, I quite liked this story.

Wow. There's no other word. (Well, there is, but I'm too amazed to think of one right now.) It's great! One of my favorite. You've outdone yourself right there. Don't ever doubt if you're a good writer because you are. That and more. :) Thank you for sharing this masterpiece.

OK, I'm going to be completely honest with you in my opinion of this story. About a quarter of the way through it, I was honestly asking myself "why the Hell am I still reading this?". I asked myself the same question about every three chapters, but for some Balance only knows reason, I just couldn't bring myself to stop reading it. You managed to end each chapter in just a way that it left me wanting to know where you were going with it. I was completely shocked with the end of chapter of chapter 24, thinking you'd killed him, which would have been beyond evil since you'd already killed Kestor.
Then chapter 25 rolls around. I really wasn't sure what to think of that chapter when it started out. My opinion must have changed a half dozen times all while I was in the process of reading it. I wasn't really sure what to think by the end of it. Either way, it was a pretty good story, if not confusing as Hell at times.

such an orginal ending, ive never read anything like that. i love this story and its deprived me of sleep and i was unable to concentrate in any classes, but it was so worth it

Tashie xo

Great story, really interesting and cool ending! :D

I was sure Chie was an animagus, Snape possible! Maybe that's just my crazy imagination :P

Anywho thanks for writing it :D

Abs x

Love the ending. Made me giggle.

1) If you know Tom Petty’s music, out of the songs Last DJ, Last dance with Mary Jane and Free Falling, which one do you like the best?

Free Falling. I like more upbeat music.

2) Smashing Pumpkins, the Red Hot Chilli Peppers or Cold Play?

In order. RHCP, CP, SP.

3) Violent Fems, Black Rebel Motorcycle Club, or the Dandy Worhols?

Violent Fems.