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| rankokun alpha 2005-03-13 ch 1, | abuseexcellent |
| rankokun alpha 2005-03-13 ch 2, | abusean excellent story i cant wait for more of it to come out! |
| annamw15 2004-06-08 ch 2, | abuseSo I'm guessing you are not going to continue this story, what a loss cause its really good. I like how you've writen Kendra, with her accent. It's a lot more beleiveable story because of it. Nice story idea too, the Buffy Harry thing has been done a lot but not the Harry Kendra thing. You've writen Harry very well, as well as Dumbledore. Anna |
| Fate 2003-11-18 ch 2, anon. | abuseOh I like this! are you going to update it soon? Please say you are!! Preety please?!?!!? |
| Lachriel 2003-11-01 ch 2, | abuseSo Kendra was the Japanese Slayer? I didn't get to watch Buffy very regularly and missed most of everything about Kendra. Except references to her death, and something about a bookcase. Very good story. |
| Midkemian 2003-09-30 ch 2, | abuseI like the fic and this chapter. I´ve always liked Kendra too. I opened the story expecting Buffy, but when I saw Kendra I decided I should continue reading... Update soon. KENTO |
| floramorada 2003-09-21 ch 1, | abusejust thought of more to say... very intruiging(sp?). Harry's reaction to her calling and her attitude was interesting. I really liked how her fighting was described. And I hope to learn more about Kendra's culture. ^_^ ~elise~ |
| floramorada 2003-09-21 ch 2, | abuseHow cute! "And this is the wonder of the wizarding world is it, Harry? Reduced to a stammering wreck when a pretty girl blushes in your general direction? Oh, there really is no hope for you. None whatsoever." Love that. Keep up the awesome work! ~elise~ |
| lara tyler 2003-09-09 ch 2, | abuseumm, since you have let us know that you are now doing the accent thing correctly, could you please stop, since we got the message, because it's slightly anoying to read, just by the way, so no cricism, but just telling you! |
| Kyra2 2003-08-15 ch 2, | abuseThe way you've typed Kendras dialect makes her parts a little difficult to comprehend, however, I can understand why it was done. Her accent was one of her more charming aspects. Really do wish they hadn't killed her off. She was rather cool. I see a romance in the making, poor Harry. Kendra isn't going to last forever. |
| smile7499 2003-07-21 ch 2, | abusei love this fic. You're writing Harry brilliantly. It's so very awesome, and i hope to read more! |
| chrish 2003-07-17 ch 2, anon. | abusePretty good. Do you plan on continuing, because I'd love to see more. :) |
| Stephanie (angelofdragons) 2003-07-10 ch 2, anon. | abusethis story is getting better with each chapter |
| -Queen-of-Spades- 2003-07-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseNicely done. You haven't updated this story in nearly four months. I like it, but you'll probably never finish. Such a waster. It's rare to find a good Kendra fic, let alone a Kendra STORY. ::sighs:: |
| secretgirl2 2003-04-20 ch 1, anon. | abusei really like the story, but i am a faithful Buffy fan so i kinda think she shood be in it. Ohh yaeh im also really in to the pairing even if i still think b/a rook |