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| Chasing Time 2008-07-23 ch 2,  | abuseI like the way you write. It just kind of... flows. |
| dory 2008-07-22 ch 40, anon. | abuseno! No! NO! *Takes deep breath* Okay... I'll be reading the sequel, I guess. :D You just felled my favorite character though. :( He usually dies in most fanfics anyway, so I'm pretty good at just dealing. Ah, this has been great. Thanks for the fic! |
| Lily09 2008-07-22 ch 35, anon. | abuseI bet it's Fletcher! I've been thinking that since the beginning... hm...it's definitely not anyone else in the order. |
| dory 2008-07-22 ch 33, anon. | abuseI knew it! :D |
| dory 2008-07-22 ch 32, anon. | abusenice chapter. I really like what you've done with Remus's character. :D Nice job! |
| Mrs. Invisible 2008-07-21 ch 7, | abusei hope peter is not a spy! |
| Mrs. Invisible 2008-07-21 ch 4, | abusei just love, love, love your story! good job! |
| tonksrockss 2008-07-12 ch 41, anon. | abuseThank you so much for putting Tonks in! I spent about half the time thinking about what Tonks was doing now! |
| thebfsgf 2008-07-03 ch 41, | abuseThis was brilliant! I loved reading this every moment! Rebecka M. |
| TBooki 2008-07-03 ch 41, | abuseOh, that was very well done I can't wait to read the next addition! :) TBooki |
| Elfa S 2008-06-28 ch 6, | abuseDamn you... I'm crying like a fountain... lol. It's so sad... It's great... Congratulations. |
| Stoneage Woman 2008-06-22 ch 41, | abuseHOLY SHIT! This story is freaking amazing! An AU in every sense, you have created a world that is wonderfully convincing, and close enough to the books to be believable. I love your fight sequences in particular. Your reinterpretation of the prophecy is one of the most original things I've seen in my life. You'r characterisation of Snape, Sirius and Remus (among others) are brilliant. Very, very well done! |
| wrappedinharry 2008-06-15 ch 6, | abuseLovely, moving chapter. Lesley |
| wrappedinharry 2008-06-15 ch 5, | abuseOh, yay...Snape is a good guy. Or is he? With spies, you never can tell, but it looks like he is. And DD is minister for magic. He obviously had to sucumb to public pressure. I don't understand why you had to use Arabella Figg as a powerful witch when there are powerful witches out there that we already know. Amelia Bones and Emmaline Vance, even Molly Weasley. And why Dung? Where's Moddy. Perhaps these questions will be answered but i don't ever understand why these little things have to change from canon. That annoys me with the movies too...little changes like giving a particular line to a different character for example...there is no need for it. Still, this is your story and you can write it how you like. You write very well, BTW. Am still enjoying the premise and am waiting for Sirius to come back. Presumably, he will be incarcerated in Azkaban, even though he has ben missing a lot longer than 5 years. Thanks for another great chapter, ~Lesley~ |
| wrappedinharry 2008-06-15 ch 4, | abuseThis story and its sequels were recommended on the Lily's Charm Yahoo group, so I thought I would give it a try. I am really enjoying it. It is a very interesting premise and I am glad to see that some of it will be from Harry'a POV. Very interesting set up with Remus as head (Where's Dumbles and Minerva) and Snape as deputy. Am interested to see if they still hate each other with a passion. Am eager to continue. Lesley |