Ah. someone else has beaten me to uploading a rewrite. It's interesting the things you did. You still kept some comedy in it, which is something mine seems to be lacking. It's also interesting how Adora was raised. nice job.

Hahaha! Very nice! Though, I still think it would have been cool if it were Shadow-Weaver who raised her, though your way does explain the fact that she remained good despite Shadow-Weaver's spell...

Wonderful! Absolutely wonderful! Very realistic, while keeping to the plot!

cool...plz write some more...am intrested to know if theree wioll be any more new characters in this and if Adora will ever met met her friend D... (sorry can't remember name) again

This is really good. It's a different view of everything and I'm like practically in love with it. I used to watch this show with my brothers when we were young and I watch the new He-man show now. I absolutely love it!

Great writing.

Ok I love She Ra, I don't remember it as well as I used to and can't wait for it to come out on DVD or something.

Still your story is the best one this site has in my opinion. I saw that you haven't updated this in such a long time that you probably gave up on it. Don't do that though I love it and really want you to continue the story. Please!

I command you to continue!

Ohhh I can't wait till the next chapter is out please Email me when the next chapter is out. Thanks

Please write more soon please

Great Story so far. Continue it!

Are you going to finish this? Please I really like it so far . I thought everone had forgotten about SHE-Ra

this is great! I never saw the movie, but now I really want to, please continue!

it's good, I like it, put the next part up soon. You're a good writer, the best I've seen in a while, you have the ability to keep someones attention throughout the entire tale. Keep it up, but remember, people like to see their fav. stories finished!

this is great! I love how you put this, it is an anime right?

This is much better than the movie! I like the reality of it.