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yours.to.hold 2008-07-27 ch 5,	abuseExcuse me while I go cry now... That was really sad! But it was still amazing!
L'uke-chan 2008-06-28 ch 5,	abuseOmg.. I'm practically crying now... This story was so beautiful, it’s breathtaking. Your descriptions were amazing, never have I read something so beautiful before... You portrayed truly how deep agonizing innocent love could be... Thank you for this brilliant, honestly stunning peace of work...
Phoenix51 2008-05-06 ch 5,	abuseThank you soo much for sharing this wonderful story with us. It has been quite awhile since I have read a story that can have you both laughing and crying with in the same chapter. but this story had me experiencing both of those emotions from begining to end. Once again, thank you soo much for this wonderful story!!
YamiYugi 2008-01-01 ch 5, anon.	abuse reward my foot!! I wish you people would give more apt warnings about character death because it always upsets me to discover that they die and there was no warning!! I know you said angst and everyone always says there is angst!! People just love it to death as if real life isn't tragic enough, but angst can mean any number of things and you should make it clear if there will be death because it upsets people. I am highly sensitive to death, I have seen lots of it in my short lifetime and I don't need to read tragic love stories, if I had understood there was death at the end I wouldn't have read your stupid story!
chichi167 2007-07-10 ch 1,	abuseI love this story! Thank You!
Ayase 2007-07-04 ch 2, anon.	abuseI always loved your stories; I read them three years ago or so and fell in love with them! Now I'm re-reading them and getting all those hints ahahaha. Let us sing! PIKA PIKA ORE PIKA (shiny shiny i'm shiny) EVERYON CAN SEE ME SHINY! Hahahaha sorry
PrincessOfTennis 2007-06-11 ch 1, anon.	abuseI LOVE YOUR FIC! It's completely awesome! I can't wait to read other fics of yours! by the way I found a picture that I think fits this story! I think you should check it out. it also has alot of other Yugioh Yaoi parings! The home page is: http://w.beepworld.de/members69/angel-yami/frameset_inhalt.htm
Kidiu Anaji 2007-06-09 ch 5,	abuseSuch a wonderful story. Heh, I keep crying. I mean, the ending was just so great. They got to be together. But why am I crying? I don't know. I can't stop. Really great story.
Tsukiyohei 2007-03-24 ch 1,	abuse... Just... wow. Osiris-Lee introduced me to this wonderful piece of literature, and honestly, I loved it. I couldn't stop crying at the end and playing sad songs (Which I still am, as I'm sort of reviewing as I cry. Bit strange...) The ending killed me, but it was so wonderfully written. I'm so glad you didn't go for the completely happy ending; going for the more heart achingly type. I was never lost; you always explained both the situation and what the characters were thinking exquisitely. I never expected you to use the Millennium puzzle at -all-, much less be inventive in its function. I love this story and, quite seriously, it's my favorite sad tale in a long, long time. Very few pieces of fan fiction have reduced me to uncontrollable tears, which is quite an accomplishment, apparently. I love your writing, and will be looking into your other stories~! ~Tsukiyohei PSS: Yes, yes, Osiris-Lee established that this is a year or two after you've actually finished. It's still phantasmic~
Osiris-Lee 2007-03-22 ch 5,	abuseOh...wow. You should be proud of yourself, I was -bawling- by the end of this. Literally, I read the last line and just sobbed; it was absolutely beautiful. I quite liked how you encorperated the Sennen puzzle into the mix also, quite clever. But by far the best was the fact that you didn't go with the happy Disney ending, but went for the gut-wrenching original. Beautiful work with Yugi's internal debate over whether to kill Yami or not, I was worried you might not do it and have Yugi just die. Speaking of death, the dying scene. The imagery of Merman-Yugi fading into bubbles and out of Yami's arms was abosolutely tragic, and I'm glad you had this rather then him diving into the sea, forgotten. Much pulling at the heart strings, this way. All in all, fabulous work. Two thumbs up. Keep up the good work, if you're still writing! _Osiris-Lee_ PS: Yes, I know this review is...two years after you're done? But who dosn't like getting reviews, honestly.
Wuteverdude 2006-10-15 ch 4, anon.	abuse"Dude, I literally cried when I read the ending part. In fact, I'm still crying while making this review. I don't normally cry when I read a fanfiction, which proves you to be an AWESOME writer! 10/10 for this chapter. T_T"
pixie sticks 2006-08-15 ch 1, anon.	abuseThe quote you said sounds so familiar to you reminds me of one from City Of Angels... where Nicholas Cage says, "I would rather have had one breath of her hair, one kiss from her mouth, one touch of her hand, than eternity without it." Is that what you're thinking of? Also - good story :D
Darkyami7 2006-06-28 ch 5,	abuse::shrieks:: I love you. :D I've been looking for a good solid, finished fic for…well, two days. I couldn't find one, until tonight…well, it's morning now. ^_^. I loved this story. The end made me cry, which was great. I love a good, angsty story. It makes me happy….except for not. Dammit, angst is addicting! ::crosses arms:: And the lemon…::dies:: That was such a good lemon. A lot of times people write them…I don't know, nastily. I love the nice sweet stuff. And you wrote it. ::smiles:: The only thing that I'm going to suggest is that you don't put author's notes in the middle of the chapter. This story was written a while ago, so I don't know if you do that anymore, but…yeah. It just takes away from the flow of the story and makes it seem far less professional. You had a wonderfully great story here, though, don't get me wrong. ::hugs:: I wish that Yami and Yugi could have had a mind-conversation, but I definitely liked the way that Yami found out that Yugi was the merman better. It was more…final. Which was why I cried. Everyone makes Keith the rapist! ::pouts:: I can't even watch episodes with him in it anymore because they make me cry. Pegasus, either. ::shudders:: Hmm…what else…oh, I like how you put in Yugi's thoughts when he couldn't talk. Otherwise I would have been like, "What the ** is he saying? ACK!' Or something like that. :] And now I really really want to go read The Little Mermaid and then watch the movie. Which is really ironic because I just signed out Anderson's huge book of fairy tales from the library for no apparent reason. ::grins:: It must be fate. Or the fact that I've been reading as many YGO merpeople fics that I could get my hands on. Yours was finished, though, so it was the last one that I'm going to read until the addiction thing comes back. ^_^. Besides, it was super awesome. I LOVE PUZZLESHIPPING! ::giggles:: Thanks so much for writing this story! You've helped to feed my chronic insomnia!
fairyMei33 2006-06-03 ch 5,	abuseThe sweet agony of heartbreak... Wonderful story! You smile and cry... it hurts to read but you can't stop. But maybe you could write a one chapter sequel of when Yami's soul is reunited with Yugi. That way you could keep the bittersweet sadness of the tale, and still give it a resolution that'll have all your readers screaming for joy like absolute idiots. And we ALL know that's what we fanfic authors LIVE for!
yakuri-moe 2006-05-29 ch 5,	abuseDammit! this is way too sad! XD T^T my heart just wrenches everytime I read this damn story, you're good girl, you're too damn good!! >.< Anyway... I've read this story a long time ago... and it actually made me cry, darn it... I mean, it's so beautiful and sad... and I LOVE this pairing, I OBSESS over this pairing it's almost sick (wait, take out the "almost") and here you have this full of angst angst and more angst story... and The Little Mermaid is one of my favourite fairy tales... arggh can't stop thinking about it! too much angst!

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