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Shizuku Tsukishima749
2008-05-20
ch 2,
abuseOh, please continue this! I LOVE your story! This is totally awesome! Stormy was SO COOL!

I LOVED the necklace idea, and I took all of the rain Stormy made as a sign of hers, telling him to hurry up! lol.

Also, I LOVED when Patty realized she trusted him, even though she didn't know why, as well as Brian's quiet words, saying he wouldn't trust her! ^U^

Keep up the wonderful work! You ROCK!! Update soon, please! ^U^ *U*
Ever-so sincerely signed,
Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;)
CuriousRiz
2008-02-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseHey! What ever happened to:

"I fully plan on continuing and finishing this story now that I finally have the time."

It's 2008 and this story was last updated in 2006. So what happened to updating since you had the time? I'm not trying to be mean or pushy but it just really annoys me when people make a promise that they just can't keep. When it comes to writing a story, you really shouldn't say those things. I'd LOVE to know what happens next but I've no idea if you'll ever update again ;( Have you forgotten about this story? Did life take over? If so you should really leave an Author's Note or Comment in the reviews section stating so.

Well, good luck with whatever your doing now! xD Just next time, please don't leave people hanging without giving a reason as to WHY. Little notes here and there are all us readers ask of the authors when it comes to LONG pauses in there stories ;)

Bye! and Have A Nice Day!
DayDreamer9
2007-11-14
ch 2,
abuseDON'T STOP! KEEP GOING! YOU'VE GOT TO SAVE RAINBOW LAND! T_T
Pixie
2007-09-26
ch 2, anon.
abusehello, darling! -- this is absolutely lovely, so far. i would very much like to read more of it. please, update! :)
Anna McNarin
2007-06-27
ch 2,
abuseThis is damn good, I do hope you don't take another three years before you up date. ;)
Crystalkeeper
2007-06-15
ch 2,
abuseah i loved this show!please put a new chapter up soon i love how dark this story is!!
Ami
2006-12-31
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow fantastic story. It's sad and yet very interesting...and looks like it could have many twists and turns that you wouldn't expect. It's cool thinking of the Color Kids as adults and yet I'm glad you made it clear they aren't supposed to be that way, and that they only aged because of the devastation that happened to Rainbowland. (Interesting that nobody, as far as I have read, has ever given a name to the planet they are from, or anything of the sort. Clearly, they aren't human and they aren't from Earth. Quite a mystery!) Hope you continue this, don't give up! I myself have to kick myself sometimes to keep writing and finish stories...I'm the Queen of unfinished fanfictions! lol
QueenOfTheUniverse
2006-12-09
ch 2,
abuseWow! Nice work! I love it so far. The fact that Patty doesn't remember anything makes it more interesting. That, and the fact that they're all grown up, That's cool! Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read more! -IW
Satsukifujin
2006-11-13
ch 2,
abuseWoW! cool! I love the stry so far! update soon!!
Hadrianna
2006-05-10
ch 2,
abuseNice! :D I would love to read how this turns out :D
ktwesterna
2006-04-23
ch 2,
abuseAh! Don't leave the story off there!
Anti Cel
2006-02-23
ch 2,
abuseoh please update, it sounds so great so far I really really really hope you do
cmartist
2004-11-08
ch 2,
abuseI love Rainbow Brite! The story is interesting and intriguing. Please continue it :)
Anonymous
2004-01-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseI love this! I used to love Rainbow Brite when I was little. And just today (I'm 20 now) I found an old tape and watched it, and the memories all flew back. Great job! I love how u have the Color kids all grown up now--around my age, kinda like we grew up in sync :)Anyway, I'd love to read more!
Martial Arts Master
2004-01-09
ch 2,
abuseI liked this story. It's very dark, but at the same time uplifting.
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