|Reviews for Focal Point|
| Lindsay 3/4/13 . chapter 6
I love this story! Have you thought about continuing or writing about marriage or family? Again amazing work!
| trish.dudley 1/13/13 . chapter 6
I know this has been a story that has been unfinished for quite some time, but I wanted you to know that you are in my prayers and you a very talanted writer and that I hope that someday I will be able to read the rest of this story! May God bless you and your family! I have really enjoyed this story! Thanks Trish
| sash queen of the jungle 11/21/10 . chapter 6
Firstly let me offer you my best wishes and prayers for you and your family. I have only just caught up with this story. Love the Picard and Beverly fluff and how their relationship is progressing. Loved wills and diana comment about sound proofing. Would live for you to continue writing this story to find out what riker junior is a boy or girl? And is there a baby Picard on the way? Will they get the terrorists.? Thanks for writing and sharing.
| Ladymemo 2/15/09 . chapter 6
A really great story. I've enjoyed it very much. I hope you'll be able to update in the near future. You have a real gift for writing.
| SuperNovaGirl 12/8/06 . chapter 6
You story is going really good so far, and I hope you update when you can,
Hope your grandfather gets well soon.
| SuperNovaGirl 12/8/06 . chapter 1
It started off really great, so I can't wait to read the rest
| DragonKid1890 7/12/06 . chapter 1
Well, it's about time. I was getting worried. Nice story. Really liked it.(even though i skimmed through it a little. Sorry.)
| carolann 7/1/06 . chapter 5
I really loved this story. You have a great writing style and I LOVE reading about Jean-Luc & Beverly as a couple. Thanks so much for sharing.
| Lady Lithoniel 1/18/06 . chapter 6
awesome story to bad it's discontinued, maybe you could start it again sometime?
| McCoy's Gal 10/8/04 . chapter 1
Cool. I'm obsessed with Bc/JLP pairings.
| AsianScaper 9/16/04 . chapter 1
I loved it! It's wonderful how you spice up the story with humor and their 'inner thoughts' belie more than just thoughts; in them are both humanity and stark realism. I'm certainly glad I came across this!
| ts 6/9/04 . chapter 1
Took a little too long, otherwise really good.
| emmyceru 5/21/04 . chapter 6
Oh my gosh, this story is excellent... One of my favorite P/C stories! I really hope that someday you will write more for it, because it really is great. Sorry about your grandfather though, I hope he gets better.
| abcooper 5/14/04 . chapter 6
This story is really good. I'm sorry about your grangfather, and he'll be in my prayers tonight.
| trekkie101 2/15/04 . chapter 6
My Grandfather just died a couple of months ago after being very ill. I understand what you're going through. One words of advice:
1)Ignore all the people clamouring for more story, including me. Your family is more important.
My eternal prayers are with you.