very wicked chapter

very wicked chapter

very wicked chapter

i luv it, u should continue writing it

I really like this story. You're one of the few fanfiction writers that, when i read there stories, actually know how to go about writing a story correctly.
I can't wait till you put the next chapter up!

WOW! this fic is great! I can't wait till u continue! I can't believe that hotaru has to do this! it would be cool if she figured out a way to save the world without destroying it! I hope Ami figures out whats going on and helps her! I love the Gboys but in this fic their not helping much, there actually aggravating the problem!
anyway...
-M
ps: PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!:):):):):):):):)

That was good, really good. I hope you do continue it, even if it takes a long time to update it. It's a great read, and it'd be a shame if you stopped writing.

I like it! Just update sooner ok?

I like it! Just update sooner ok?

"I might discontinue this story but who knows in the end I might come back and do another chapter…if I don’t you should see another chapter pretty soon… I hope )" ...
discontinue... that means stop updating *looks detatched*... WHAT! *big eyes* WHY WOULD YOU EVER DO A THING LIKE THAT! BAD THOUGHT! BAD IDEA! NO-NO-NO-NO-NO-NO!
this story is so pretty! so detatched and fun to read. I love it. Discontinuing would be a horrible thing and I would have to find some way to find something else I like as much as this. Please continue, please finish. I really like this story and am not just one of those really flippy happy people that say this stuff all the time. I really am serious and I really think people should make time for "I love writing but I am finding less time to do it." you only live once! take chances, have fun, and enjoy what you are doing! 'No day but today', live for now, live for what you want to do... make time for what you want to do if it makes you happy! please! (and if that isn't good enough for what makes you AND other people happy)...
anyway, I really enjoyed reading this chapter... (except for your note at the bopttom... [could you tell ^-^ ] ) It was really detatched feeling, it reminds me of X-Day (its a manga), though completely different in everything, they remind me of detatched feelings/emotions/lives. X-Day makes me feel detatched, and this story is detatched... (I'll stop confusing you now...). Anyway, what I was saying is that I really like the way this chapter came out and am very glad that you updated, and await another update with impatience and anticipation... ^-^
always till the end,
Shaedows

UPDATE!>.

Hey,Kepp it up!Update soon!

This is such a fantastic story. I'm not sure that I've read many others of this calaber. You are skilled, I must admit. I really hope you write more soon.
- Damia -

Dum Dum DUM! I like I like. I am really beginning to think that Duo's a stalker. -.-; He's a little odd sometimes. More Quatre please. If you can. But if you can't, that's okay. Write more soon please. Ja ne
~minimerc

Hm really interesting. I liked it. Please get the next chapter out as soon as you can, till then, ja ne!