That was a pretty poem! XD

Nice imagery- a good poem. Arwen rocks!

Well, I don't read much poetry - it usually confuses me - but this was very good. Seeing as though I can't write poetry myself, I don't have much of anything to tell you to improve upon. Very nice.

Aragorn Elessar

this is beautiful

OMG! sniff sniff sniff sniff sniff! I just picked up on the Evenstar, Elessar and Aragon, Arwen subtleties aw.

That was beautiful and it could have been anyone who wrote even LEGOLAS