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| All Mighty Terrestrial 2004-03-17 ch 1, | abuseHow sweet! And you're just as good with Weiss as you are with Sark! Is it right to be jealous? |
| trisanamcgraw 2003-10-19 ch 1, | abuseMarvelous details here; you've really fleshed out the Sydney/Weiss relationship. I hope to see more from you. |
2003-03-03 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is great. i'd like to see it on sd-1. |
| rubykate 2003-02-27 ch 1, | abuseI usually don't submit reviews as I usually come across as something akin to a cave man. You.Good. However I liked this fic. First Wiess fic, actually. No worries, your characterization kicked ** (as usual) and your dialogue was so interesting, vital, funny, with nothing unnecessary. Also, loved the Playstation scene. Weiss wearing sandals (the visual is enough to give me a smile for the next week). Weiss stuffing his hands into his pockets to keep from reaching for her. The mention of Donovan going to the door every day. The fortune. Ruby |
| Kara B 2003-02-26 ch 1, | abuseInteresting! MORE SOON! |
| Sharon 2003-02-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis story is so good, you have to keep going with it. I love the emotion you've put into the characters. Please continue. |
| christie 2003-02-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseOOh, I like it. |
| Diana 2003-02-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseRach, this was really well done. So very realistic, so in-character. and your Weiss? Damn good for an apparent first try. Yeah, I liked this :) |
| Trella 2003-02-25 ch 1, | abuseno words unbelievable, yet againe |
| Gabs 2003-02-25 ch 1, | abuseOh, I like. I was laughing out loud at the James Bond part. Syd running him into a wall. great story, is there more? |
| pie1 2003-02-25 ch 1, | abuseBravo Rach! I really enjoyed this story. Your characterization of Weiss was great - I thought you did an excellent job capturing him and what he would be like with Sydney. Love it, Amy |
| Celli 2003-02-25 ch 1, | abuseI love this. You've captured Weiss so perfectly--and yes, that's exactly what Sydney would do in this situation. *hugs* Brilliant! |