Very tastefully done. Beautiful sensations of lightness and tenderness. Good job. :)

omg,such a cute story! i love it :D

Wow, it made me blush ^^ Such a brilliant piece of writing, I fell in love with Sanji and Nami even more! It was realistic, too!

Well, as realistic as a pair of fictional anime/manga characters can get :P

Thank-you for the story! :)

Wow. @_@ I don't...This is a excellent piece. >D And I'm thrilled that you written it. Been wanting to read a good Nami/Sanji and alas I found one. xx; Even if its only a one-shot.

-Rin

No comment but.. Aaw! That's soo sweet!
It almost made me cry~! ;} SOO SWEET!!
Luv it!

So very sweet. Gentle too. It was a very good story.

I'll give my complaint first: I know it's just a one "chapter" deal, but it went fast at the end! A bit unrealistic with the sudden decision of sex...but whatever.

I got that part done and over with because I LOVE THE REST OF IT. I can NEVER find good SanjixNami stories/one shots anymore! It's all this yaoi/yuri crap. But this is SO GOOD. I love the POV of Nami; it's so accurate! You've captured what her thoughts might perhaps be, and I enjoyed it immensely. Great job! I'm adding you to my favorites. x)

Aw... I never read OP fanfics, and I never liked Sanji/Nami before.

Now I do. *_*

Your AsuKure fics pwn all.

That was the absolute sweetest thing I have ever read. Ever. Omg.

That was just.. so.. cute! THIS is what Sanji/Nami is supposed to be. I applaude you.

Aw. that's the sweetest thing ever ^^

splendid!

very nice...not many oneshots make me happy but I really like how deep it was. I wish there was more of this pairing in the One Piece section, but no one loves me enough :( Oh well, good, very good!

That... was too sweet for words. :') Your descriptions are so beautiful and enthralling, and... please, just keep up the great work. Best OP fanfic I've ever read.

Awe, kawaii! i love it soo much it was cute!

Ahh. Splendid ficcie. =3

I must add.