that kinda makes me feel bad for hank! please continue.

Bizarre is a good this is a great story. Well written as always, you have given us an(other) explanation about what on earth could possibly be going on with this show.

Grav

aw so sad! i know! lets pitch both the guys and bring in nick! or even warrick! NO on second thought HES MINE! SHE CANT HAVE HIM!

The different POV's were interesting and very in-character. It's cool when the reader can actually sympathize or empathize with a character he/she normally doesn't care for. Great job.

Mich - boy did this story surprise me! Just when I thought I knew what kinds of stories you write, you blow me out of the water! Excellent!

This was good. I've been trying to understand what would possess Sara to be with Hank, and this makes sense. She's trying to make the most of a bad situation.

Liked this a lot - the insights into the characters - everything. I hope Grissom gets his act together soon, and fixes things before it's too late.