 SweetHeartJamie 6/20/04 . chapter 1omg I swear my eyes are tearing up right now that was such a beautiful poem. |
 Kagome3007 12/13/03 . chapter 1T-T wow! That was so amazing! I remember that scene from book... um... 3, I think. I don't remember which book. It was April 1, so that means Everworld 3 Enter the Enchanted, so I'm right. Anyway, that poem really touched me! Shut up, Christopher! (You [u]know[/u] he would have some snide, perverted remark, had he been here. You [u]know[/u] it) It was amazing! I was almost crying at the end! I love it! |
 Supa Nova thats my pen name 10/22/03 . chapter 1 *sniff sniff* Beautiful! |
 Ghost Writer no. 3 2/25/03 . chapter 1Cool. That was sad when Galahad died. That was pretty good. Well, bye! |
 Princess Aranel 1/24/03 . chapter 1I think your poem is absolutely beautiful. I loved it so much. You have real talent. Don't let it go to waste. You can, and probably will, be a great author someday. |
 Chels 2/2/01 . chapter 1 Too COOL! I love Galahad...(even though he isn't real...) I actually rewrote the ending to 'Enter the Enchanted' just so he wouldn't die, it didn't turn out that great, but it was good enough.
I like how you two came up with this poem, it's really...uh...poetic. Yeah. Keep up the great writing skills!
Chels |
 anon 1/9/01 . chapter 1 Ah... again, very deep. (I like saying that, don't I? _;) Congratulations on such an exquisite poem, and give my congrats to Christy! _ |
 The lady Terwilliger relentless critic of both herself and others 6/13/00 . chapter 1 Quite good, though it could have had better rhythm. I'm a poet, too, and I quite liked the last verse. |