I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

"one in a million chances crop up nine times out of ten."

Someone's been reading Terry Prattchet.

Chilling and satisfying. One would have hoped that the brightest witch of the age would have coped better, but being bright doesn't necessarily mean one has the emotional capacities for the horrors of life.

Well done. Very well done indeed.

Hey, I was wondering...I love that poem, I have it copied and up on my door as a sort of wallpaper along with other song lyrics, but are you sure it's by Edgar Allan Poe? I mean, he lived in the 1800's, and the word "okay" didn't come into use until around WWII.

Your story is so sad. I cryed. I loved it. I hadn't expected that at first, but I really liked it.

whoa -
found this through WIKTT

this was a breathtaking, soul-wrenching read-
straight-forward and profound.

thank you.

How sad and moving, with a dark edge to it. Excellent use of song lyrics. I really enjoyed it.

I can see why this story was nominated. Unfortunately, the trouble with songfics is that sometimes, you just stumble upon a songfic based on a song you're not familiar with and because of that, it subtracts from the reading experience. No matter, the story was still very lyrical and very haunting.

I totally did not expect her suicide in the third part of the story. I guess it was appropriate. She was a casualty of the war, and Snape's gesture to have her buried with her peers showed his understanding.

Simply beautiful--no blatant romance; nothing like that. The appeals to emotion were wonderfully subtle, and the piece, on the whole, comes out as painfully powerful, with images and thoughts that the reader can't quite forget... Like the brushing of her hair against his face, or the wine bottle slipping from her fingers, or the notebooks in the dungeons. The first chapter, as it were, ended somewhat sweetly (I know *I* loved it), the second was bitter, and the third was specially bittersweet. I have read and loved many of your works; this story one of the best. The way you have so far experimented--and keep on experimenting--with your writing is commendable.

Moving, dramatic and very emotional. Lovely piece of writing, I am lookng forward to seeing where you end up :)

Wow, I'm speechless. This is fantastic. I've been a fan of your writing for sometime, but this. I don't really know what to say. I didn't know anyone else listened to this type of music, when you read the story and listen to the song at the same time it's chilling. Breathtaking. Needless to say, I so look forward to your next story. (I looked forward to coming back from Winterpeg, and finding your third chapter up.)

Shaggers (Dee)

Beautiful. Just painfully beautiful.

This story was just. heartbreaking. You write so beautifully. I love that your style is subtle, but still incredibly effective. There's this perfect mixture of harshness, tenderness, sadness, and beauty. I'm kind of in awe of this story, and I'm very pleased that I read it.

Your first chapter is really lovely. Sad, but in a lovely, horrifying sort of way. I have a feeling that's not the best explanation of how I feel about this story, but it's the best I can do. I really like it so far.

whoa, very powerful and VERY unexpected end there, i almost cried, beautifully done