No offence but the beginning of the story was all broken up, I'm sure if it was just my computer or some thing but there was loads of weird simbols half way through every three sentences ot spmething. Well it fixed later on anyway, I loved the plot and the story and I want you to know this is not a bad review I just wanted to point out that little problem at the beginning. This story is going on my fave list k bye.

I like Jessica. Definately. She's got style, class and a glib tongue!
I’ve got a wedgie…and I’m not even wearing underwear.” That was more than I wanted to know. I think my comment was "Ew!"
GB Pres. Uhm, that's something like "sins of the fathers" isn't it? (Have you ever heard of Sin Eaters? That's what I'm thinking about. Gross. I know. But so is GB for Pres. Even GB2.)
*snort!* Did Simmons ever wear super tight anything? Heheheheh. God what an image! I swear if I can't get that image out of my mind, I'll pay you back. Somehow, someway, someday, I'll pay you back ... hehehehh.
“OOh…I think I just made wine out of him…” You have just joined the "Don't drink tea while reading club". It's quite exclusive: Darkness, Kitty and now YOU. :wipe, wipe, wipe:
Yama: what do you want to do with your life -- truly.
Questions:
Warren: is being a "villian" what you want to do? Or are you 'going along'?
Neko: c sounds good to me. How Does she feel or maybe that should be WHAT does she feel?
Patricia: Who sent you? Whom do you serve?
With a name like Jason Columbine ... no questions. I don't think I would like the answers.
Jessica: all of the above!?!
Halley: he acts/thinks like there was a 'failure'. Is this something he knows? Something he experienced? Or something he fears? And how DOES the old fart stay alive that long?
Kim
PS: nice piece btw. Very nice. thought provoking; even the fight against the demon was fun.

Woof! What a chapter! Detailed; Yama and Warren in jail (gotta love it! - tho I've never seen a jail cell with its own TV) I think you're right when you say everyone is beginning to realize the truth of their times and their lives. Truth is a heavy burdon; Patricia isn't alone. Halley's memories are delightful by the way.
"But at one point, they stayed one colour and never changed ever again. When Yuri and Alice had married and had their first child, the man in a trench coat had finally found peace within himself. " A wonderful summation and a heart warming conclusion (?) to a life of trial and loneliness.
"blundering wonder " I LOVE IT! Best description of a character I've heard in a long time. Does Yama have ANY hope at all of getting his act together? Rhetorical, as you'll tell us when and as you do.
Love this story.
Kim

First off, did I ever mention how sarcastic your DE is? He's delightful. And Yama bashing his head, even lightly, in the coffee store ... it isn't going to help Yama! :)
Well I must say, Patricia having a melt down was interesting; unexpected too. She's usually collected ... too much Nog on New Years Eve?
*cough cough* Yama takes after his granddad; distracted by short skirts (even his sister's) and slamming into trees. He's a bit slow on the uptake. God you'd think he'd get it by now ... hahahah.
Minor correction: Bistritz was in the Austro Hungarian empire, specifically the Carpathian mountain region of what is now called Slovakia but was then called Roumania.
Koneko's little adventure in the end was poignant. Reminded me of John. I met John at a house he was staying in. He was a teenager, high schooler; nice kid but confused. He loved Def Leoppard and hated water. He thought his parents would never forgive him, and he stayed at the nice lady's house at the bend in the river, the very river that took his life. He's gone now, since 1993 I think. But I still remember that kid with fondness. He had died in a car crash into the river the year before.
Kim

With *that* history, and a name like Warren Twinklewood, you really do have to have some sympathy for the guy. . . I like that bit at the end with Halley reminiscing. . .

Oh and by the way: "only you guys like my fic. -.-;; "

As far as I can tell five people are reading this! That's actually millions. . . if you know what I mean. Well it's quite a lot anyway, isn't it?

Alright, more chapters! Actually, I'm sorry, I intend to review the day before{I find your fic in 'Just In' and when it's still not fully uploaded, I waited for it) then after I finish reading, totally forgot to review it! (Instead, went off to flame some Mary-Sue in LotR)

Anyway, let me answer the questions!

1=d, {This could turn out to be very...interesting)

2=a, that would be a threat I use when that happens, me like using threat to people!

3=d, screaming means good and mental image is funny!

4=a, me never love someone before so don't ask me.

5=a, stare in total disbelief would be better.

Done and wish to see another update, now, back to flaming!

FINALLY!

Margarete: Oh, you can talk!! I was unconscious on a boat for FOUR BLOODY MONTHS cos you ran off to write about harmonixers instead!

O_o; Sorry, MIss ma'am. . . .Anyway. . .very good update, love the fic. And looking forward to the thickening of plot coming up. In hopefully less than. . .however long that took. . . Yay, more questions, very cool questiony idea thing.







1d, (I would love to see how that one turns out),
2. . .Uh. I think I'll pick b. (Royally **? What, like drunk as a lord? ^^ I think ** here means like ** off though. . .*confused*Is it just in britain where "**" means drunk, and you need an "off" on the end to make it mean angry? Or do you actually mean people are drunk and that's why the enemy joins the team?^^ whatever. . . I still pick b though.
3.d, screaming's good,
4. I have to pick one of these? I can't just say "Oh goody, it all went to plan then" and forget all about it? Okay, then, if I have to pretend to *like* the guy then D.
5.a. "Too good to be true" kind of shock.

1. d. I have no idea who he is, but I assume he's annoying.
2. d
3. d (attention seeker or what!)
4. b/c. "No!! Give them back you **' bastard"
5. d. Or maybe e (fuse with Death Emperor and tear them limb from limb. Hey, it worked for Yuri!)

I disagree with your comment that Neko spoke too much in this chapter. She said everything that needed to be said, especially at the end with that poor ghost guy.

Yama is oblivious, even for a Hyuga. I have this irrestible urge to beat him senseless.

And I suspect that Patricia is nowhere near as important as Neko is. Don't ask me why, but I think that the Martyr isn't Patricia. My spider senses must be on the frizz.

1) b
2)...can 'kill him or try to' be an option?...fine then...d
3)c
4)d, just cause it's funny and I want to see who would do that
5)b

About the book's bleeding...is it for people who are really guilty, or people who just have guilty consciences?

And...with the flashbacks...I want to say Yama is a reincarnation of Yuri, and I want to say Patricia is a reincarnation of Margarete (just how many times has she showed her panties so far?)

But then...there probably aren't any reincarnations in here...probably just me...::bangs head::

Interesting story, once I got past the formatting nightmare. You DO need to kick your beta in the butt tho' for spelling/grammer booboos. As for story, great idea! I enjoyed watching young Yama get his "stuff" together to finally accept what he is ... or is he fooling even himself? Right about the 1/2 way point of chappy 8 the dice all clicked together for me and I realized you were fibbing big time! Wow! "Aqua Heal" indeed. So, like, when is there an update? (*grin*) Keep up the good work. Your story shows great promise.

Um yeah, this used to have tons of reveiws on it didn't it? I don't know what's going on here. Did you reupload it and not add another chapter or something? Cos I remember Part 9 going up, then you said you'd upload another chapter soon, and now. . .I'm confused! As usual. Is it just me being thick as always?

Wow, what happened to the formatting? And when are you going to update? I'm sure that people are reading this, just not reviewing.

Hah! I'm the first reviewer! (Yes I know, I'm acting my mental age again)

In answer to your questions
1. b (Aenea is a little sad that way)
2. a (Considering that my birthday was a month ago and I can now drink legally.)

This is shaping up to be a really good story. Just, how stupid is Yama? He's had the fact that he's a Harmonixer shoved down his throat and still doesn't get it? Typical male.