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tornadoblake2009
2009-09-18 . chapter 1
hey great chapter
pstibbons
2007-05-04 . chapter 3
It's a tragedy that she married Ron.
xnicolexa
2005-09-03 . chapter 3
Great story! So sad though... My eyes are all red...
Blueberrie
2003-11-08 . chapter 3
OMG, I've got tears in my eyes. This little fic was brilliantly written. normally in fics where Harry goes to azkaban he's innocent, so the first paragraph of the fic was a surprise, nice for a change though. now i'm of to read some of your other fics.

*Blueberrie*
Evanescent Scars
2003-09-23 . chapter 3
Silver Bow: I HATE YOU! YOU KILLED HARRY, DUMBLEDORE, AND HERMIONE AND HARRY DIDN"T EVEN GET TOGETHER! The fic was great, but so sad... :(

~Silver Bow

PS: This is not a flame. I was just exaggerating but why?
The Fine Balance
2003-07-10 . chapter 3
I can't belive he could do this you know. But i have a little thing...i like the story but if you forgot HARRY IS BEING FOLLOWED...i knew that imediatly after 4th year. Come on, do you think Dumbledore was not going to keep an eye on him after Voldemort came back? Didn't think so. If the Dud's had touched him with a knife...even the slightest bit...belive me they would have been cursed into the 40 century. So all in all, i mean putting thse and a few other(Sabers Blah blah aside)I found this a okay flick. Not the Best Dark on, but not the worst either.
colleen
2003-06-30 . chapter 3
This story was sort of confusing with Harry turning evil, but the last two chapters made me cry so hard. peace.
Colleen
Saphadeke
2003-06-30 . chapter 3
Whoa. This has to be the most depressing fic I have ever read. Good job :)
tiger xox lily
2003-05-15 . chapter 3
That was such a good story. As I write this, I'm crying. I'm serious. I totally, absolutely LOVED it. It's so sad, and yet, it has a happy ending. Just...wonderful.
Katrina Tonak
2003-04-18 . chapter 3
That was wonderful. Good job. The begginning was a bit corny but it was still good.
Jassy
2003-03-04 . chapter 3
I like stories where Harry turns evil be this is my fav. Cry Cry Cry
dragoonkain3
2003-03-01 . chapter 3
Well, i went through the next 2 chapters w/out pausing due to glaring mistakes. Thats good. :D

Anyways, you wrote this w/out any reviews? good for u. The best writers are always the ones that doesn't expect anything in return. I really liked it.

But theres always room for improvement, ne? For one, Hermione is against using elfs, so its OOC for her to have Winky. Apart from that, I think Harry's mullings over losing Hermione was not explored well enough. Oh well, theres always the next fic.

Looking forward to ur writings!
dragoonkain
2003-03-01 . chapter 1
Hmm. Very interesting. I've always been interested in seeing Harry struggle with the dark side, ever since i read "digging the hole, then climbing out". I am actually surprised book!harry has not even thought of joining the dark side. but i digress.

Anyway, its a well written story. my only fib with it is that you BROKE the mood with the star wars allusion. Transported to a galazy far far away, then talkin about lightsabres is not fit for a fic as serious as this. in a parody maybe, but not a dark fic.

Also a note. Why would Lily want to kill muggles? She was after all muggle born. It didnt make sense to it.

Apart from those fibs, i think this story is great. Very few ppl actually take the time and effort to write their fics well. Looking forward to ur next fic.

2003-02-28 . chapter 3
that was a great story!
Juliz
2003-02-28 . chapter 3
OMG! That is so sad.i almost started crying! But it waz really really good! Pleaz keep writing!
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