Very good plot line to this poem, and good rhythm. You might want to work on punctuation at the end of lines, though. Keep at it. :)

Quite good poem ideed. I don't usually enjoy poetry, but I am big fan of Quest For Glory, so of course, I couldn't missed new fic in this cathegory.

Your poem was quite good indeed and it was set in mood of Quest For Glory, which, of course, made it even better.

Good work!