brilliant. its so realistic, and the ending was particularly great!

you mustve put a lot of thought into this, and if not youve got a real talent :)

keep writing id love to read more of your stuff

Wow, this was fantastic. A bit of Videl-Gohan, a bit of his friends and family - and a bit of his heart's dark thoughts.

This was excellent.

More greatness _ you are one awesome writer XD

nice story

why are all ur stories so kawaii! u have got to be the best author i've read so far!

these fics of yours are becoming addicting... ::glances at the clock and relizes that it's half past 11:: O.O; erm...anyway...awesome fic... (as usual...) you have a real talent for writing _ ...now if i can keep my eyes open long enough, i'll click the little "Submit Review" button so my words can be seen...good ::yawns:: job... ::rubs eyes drowsily and clicks the button:: .

*sigh* i do believe that this fic is a primary example of y i hate hercule. i hate hercule

So SAD! *sigh* you know, I read a lot of your stuff, and a lot of its sad... But good at the same time... *sigh* I LOVED IT THOUGH!

that was...so...great! :D good fic saddening though :( keep up the good work _

Thats adorable!

-kun! Let me give you a hug! *glomps Gohan* Good job Candyland-chan! Wonderful Gohan-kun introspective! KUDOS and all that other stuff _! Poor ViVi-chan!

great job! I loved it! I think that is what Gohan would be thinking. *thumbs up!*

bye

that was really good. I loved the end the best.

"Hercule’s reaction is completely understandable. He lost someone he loved, his family.

I lost many people I loved, my family.

After all, Hercule loved his daughter.

The thing is that I loved her too."

That part. That was my fav. part.

good job!

_ GOOD STORY! Gohan proubably did think that, VERY GOOD!

Oh gosh. how many times do I have to say that your writing completely amazes me? Coz it does!

Poor Gohan! If I were him, I'd have an ego the size of Texas! Isn't it weird - and kinda sad - how if someone is blatantly the best, most talented, nicest, sweetest (etc) person ever in the whole world, they can still really hate themselves? Poor Gohan! He's like - like CHARLIE BROWN! I never knew what a tortured soul Charlie Brown was until I watched it when I was thirteen and I sat there thinking, "Oh my Kami. That poor kid! He hates himself! But HOW? He's so cool!"

I really loved the ending. *big smile* Isn't it great when characters finally figure out something that you knew all along? _