oh another great chapter, loved it, the last part the most though, I guess...but as said, great new chappie

I look forward to the next chapter of any thing you have to wright, keep up the good work it is apreciated. Ja-ne =(^_^)=

“Hello!” she called out. “Is anyone in here? Tenchi? Ayeka? Um… Washu?” There was no answer. The contemplative look turned sly. Alone.

Oh, she is SO lucky she wasn't in a horror movie at that time otherwise she would have been dead right there.

Beyond that, it was a nice read and about damn time you updated this story. And I see why it was rated R. Almost missed it cause of that, but I'm glad I didn't. Nice work as always, though there are times when thinking of Sasami in that context is just...plain creepy. But that could be just me.

...And Sasami makes three. That would make Tenchi a rather selfish man, wouldn't it? Three Princesses, two sisters, and a pirate. A Goddess, a demi-god, and a demon. A cook, a headwoman, and a Lady of the House. As for Sasami/Tsunami's dream? Filios has been known to shift to agape and thence to eros. All things are possible in the Multiverse and Eternity is a _long!_ time.

Wow, a R rated story from Senor Reese, but a good story at that.

Your stories usually centers around the trio so having to read this interesting tale of Sasami was a treat. Boy, talk about sudden changes. Thumbs up on this one dude.

You know with the fact that Sasami willbe Tsunami I think you did a bang up job . Not only in the actual assimilation, but in the other things that would naturally happen before , during, and after.
Loved all the scenes and though you really had a decent chance at making it thre Mrs. Masaki's, you handled this well and properly. I think most of us will always think of Sasami as our little sister, even if she's as gorgeous as Tsunami.
Which begs the question, Who will you come up with as a credible boyfriend?
Well with those other dimensions, Maybe a son of A goddess First class, or a Great Grandson of the Quen of Naboo, or Maybe a the cute, but geeky partner to one Jean Starwind. Oh well enough of my suggesting.
Please continue writing as i have missed your stories for a while now.
dennisud

I have to be honest when I say, this is quite a nice read. Inspirational and everything. Please continue but take your time, no need to rush anything.

Not bad. it kind of fits with your other stories too. I'll look forwrd to Sassamis' tale. Ja-ne =(^_^)=

Hey, I'm just skimming through the Tenchi section before class and found this nice little fic to read. It was perfect, not too long and not too short either.

I liked it, I can say that with open honesty, and I never lie … much. But I’m telling the truth here, so no worries there. It’s a shame that this has so little reviews, but authors write so the story is to be told, whether anyone read or reviews is immaterial. I always forget that through and I love getting reviews. Wait, this is a review!

I love the fic; it was different, but so believable. Ayeka’s right the little minx when it comes to rebelling against her father … a typical adolescent her age (whether she’s royal or not) and I speak from experience, we all do it when we don’t get our own way … hell yeah!

I’m just telling you now if I don’t review any of your fics for a LONG time that I love them all and I really want to review … short of time through.

Gotta go.

Bye

Bexi

It is interesting to this written up. I thought the disclosure in the earlier story was a little odd and this make a great deal of sense.
It also seem to be a little more smoothly written than some of your other stories, something that definitly works in it's favour. Any further character past stories would certainly be welcome if you have the material.

nice fic, it is great to see you posted it again. I liked it.

It appears that everyone's in the mood to do a Ayeka fic these days. Well, the more, the merrier.

As always, I liked how you give our characters a interesting past that eventually leads to the Masaski Home. The story stands good as it is, but maybe a sidetrip for Ayeka wouldn't hurt either.


Andrew

Well much smoother.But
Two line kinda stuck out here see below!

A few weeks shy of the second anniversary of Yosho’s disappearance and five days before her seventeenth birthday, Azusa called his daughter into the audience room.

-Then a few lines later;''

Ayeka’s eyes grew wide.  She wondered if her father could possibly know what had happened on Banri’s last night in the palace.

Seems you need to fix the timeline there.
But otherwise an excellent story to start all that will happen up to Ryoko's awakening. Seems you've discovered the Tenchi Muyo novels huh!
Good for you and remember to keep with the timeline in the future!

dennisud