holy shit! yami marik took ryo to a BAR?

why did you stop it was very good

This story is AWESOME! Me and my friend Saints Light just wanna say you ROCK, and pls continue soon

come on and update, this is intresting!

OMG! that was so good! it was amazing! ahahahahahahahahaha! anyway, update soon!

o.o Oh no. Poor Ryou.

*Drool* Sexy Ryou...UPDATE SOON!

Love the story so far, great for a laugh. Can't wait to see what happens.

Oh, poor Ryou! Marik is so dead if Bakura finds out what he's done... i wonder what he's gonna do with Yugi... funny ficcy! Update soon! D

*eye twitching spastically, vein popping in forehead, mad grin on face*What was that Panina? I'm useless you say? After I give you ideas for the next 6 chapters? WHAT THE HELL DO YOU MEAN USELESS? Especially since I was talking to you while you were writing this chapter giving you ideas!I gave you all the ideas for the chapters since the beginning! *sniffle, tear forms in eyes* Fine! See if I help you anymore!*runs out crying*

Interesting. Duke Devlin's japanese name is Ryuuji Otogi. Otogi is his first name. They just reverse the way they say it.

This is a very cinfysing story do to them switching their Yamis

Nice . I don't really like hikaris paired with yamis, but I can live with it. Never have seen Ryou paired with Mariku very often. I like Bakura and Mariku as a couple. Glad you are making a story about them. please update.

Make one of Marik ad Ryou!I LOVE That couple! Doing GREAT! UPDATE!

Yamis and hikaris.