woho Algebra sux (that's beside the point); anyway, it was great!

it's a great poem, if it was written during algebra. Please read the previous MARS books, they're really good.
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Nice, I like it.

u really should read the other mars books. i love them! this sounds like somthing kira would rite, so i guess ur right on!

Well I like i have read better but for a first work it is great
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You should send this in to a magizine or something i think that it is a good poem. Better than just a fan fic.
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HEEHEEHEE! I write stuff in my math classes all the time. Especially when the teacher is going over stuff that I already understand! :p

Anyways, considering that's the circumstances in which it was written. Simply lovely!