wow!great job there!i so love your story...i really read it all til the end!i thank u!
and hey,id be much delighted if you write more...
u have an amazing thought dude!
see ya then!

nice
it was a great story

hi. i enjoyed the whole story, but I have to admit I was a little disappointed at the end... *sigh* I'm more of an AK fan, that's why. Heheh.. But good job for finishing the story. ^_^

wonderful story... kinda sad to find out that aoshi is dead but at least kaoru figured it out and went to see his grave... happy that kenshin & kaoru are together... really liked it... good job... great work...

it's haraheta. And it's Tsuzuku, not Tsuzuko. Ahh, I wonder when Kaoru would meet Aoshi again.

wonderful

wow. aoshi basically created a whole illusion of a new alternate version of her life for her. whoa! loved it!!

dang that is one twist...all this time Karou had gone into the past or something...hmm interesting

OK. First off, i gotta say this is truly a great story. the idea was fresh, original and kept within the true ages. i like the way the characters developed and that Kaoru and Kenshin were confused about their feelings but eventually just went along with it.
Unlike everyone else, however, i don't think the ending was that great. it's like Marge's death and role in Kenshin's life was an utter lie and as was Aoshi. All he was was a lonely ghost, meaning he and Kaoru only met in a DREAM! i'm also sorry the he's never gonna experience true love and has to live - i mean, unlive, undead(?) whatever - a one-sided one.
despite the big deal you made of SoujiroXMisao at first, you didn't mention much of them after. Sano and Megumi neither.
well,overall,good thing going on here. anyone know how to delete a story from MY Favorites?

Ja Ne! :D :)

Moonlight Star Phoenix

This was great! An unexpected ending. It was just slightly annoying using 'ow!' instead of 'oh!' unless it was intentional. But the story was really good.

wow.. after reading your explanation in the end. it made sense. haha i kinda liked it. wasnt expecting it though. kind warped but warped in a good way :D any new stories?
it was fun taking this journey. hahaha!

Whoa... I wasn't expecting that for an ending. I think I liked it though. There wouldn't have been any other way for you to end it without someone being terribly hurt. So yeah, good job! And congratulations on finishing another lovely fic.

^.^
sulou

You sound as though you lack confidence but you're a really good writer. So good in fact that I hate that this story is actually ended (not that the ending wasn't satisfactory). Thank-you so much and I wish you the best. Continue to write because hey, you can only get better even if you're struggling with what to do next. :P

OH-H-H-H-H-H! I get it. I had to re-read the last chapter and the first five chapters several times before I noticed your last A/N and figured it out. I get it! Actually, I think that's a rather cool way of ending it. At first I was like. . ."Okay, so, now she's Dorothy from the Wizard of Oz?!" but now I get it, and it's different. Wowzers. That was long. But it was good. And even though there was side plots that had absolutely NO part of Aoshi's dream-scheme, they were still entertaining. But I am still confused. How old was she when she had the accident? Is she now going to live happily ever after with Ken-nii? I don't get it (I'm very slow with these kind of things) but I absolutely loved your story. ... (re-reading your A/N) OH! I get it now. Heh... hehehh... (glooms away)

I love this story, and I loved reading it. I started reading it so long ago (has it really been two years?) Meh, I haven't updated my story in that long. . . . (wanders off, glooming)

Well, good job. Have a cookie.
~Chibi

Congrtaz ending the fic -cher for you- is nicely written.Please tell me you have upcoming fic in mind (RK of course!)