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| one piece fan 2006-03-22 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was pretty good! The kuro arc was one of my favorites. Thanks for writing this! |
| Kira 2005-12-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseAdorable. Just adorable. You really do have an excellent handle on Usopp. |
| tori007otaku 2005-08-19 ch 1,  | abuseaiyaa...(bursts into tears) Agh! That was so...BEAUTIFUL! PLEASE, I BEG of you! WRITE A SEQUEL! Anywho keep writing! ^.^ |
| Uozumi 2005-08-18 ch 1, | abuseYay! I'm glad you wrote a Kaya/Ussop fic! It's awesome ^_^ One of the few adn best out there actually. ~ Uozumi |
| Darkday Chaos 2005-06-15 ch 1, anon. | abuse... ((BZZT)) ... Chaos here. Eh, made me cry a little... This is perfect for the story. Wonderful writing! Augh, now I want to hear the rest of Usopp's story! *...and then what? What happened next, Usopp...??* Eh, really sweet. Chaos out. ... ((BZZT)) ... |
| Matoko Shizaki 2005-03-21 ch 1, | abuseThat was wonderful! They're such a cute couple. Odd, but cute. ^-^ You did a really nice job with this story. I can completely picture it happening! |
| AerdnaMilos 2004-08-03 ch 1, | abuseYAya I loved this. Usopp and Kaya are my fave OP couple eveb though I like Usop. |
| The Qing 2004-07-28 ch 1, | abuseThat was both depressing...and beautiful! (sniff) Check out my One Piece story too! If you want that is... |
| A.L1 2004-06-27 ch 1, | abuseThis story is so sweet and cute! I like how it was easy to read and the way you presented it was well done. I can't really give constructive critisism. You also did Kaya's POV very well. You did very good at presenting Kaya's feelings. Although, it made me feel sad that I couldn't connect with her... |
| Hydra-Star 2004-06-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is very good. I like it a lot. But it doesn't really seem like the end. You should continue it, or write a sequal. Of course, this is just a suggestion, you don't have to do it. I really like this. The idea was great. And I like the way that you brought back the way that he mother told her stories at the end and made it into symbolism. That was really cool. Great job! Keep it up! |
| Jingu.J 2003-12-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseExcellent choice of subject to be written and you wrote them very well. Usopp and Kaya. Two thumbs up! |
| ImagenAshyun 2003-10-25 ch 1, | abuseHehehe... ^^ I love this! Really touching, it really reaches in towards Kaya's feelings of the situation involving her parents' death and the meeting with Usopp (btw, although I've only read the first book of One Piece and that I've only known Usopp through spoilers and reviews, I absolutely love him! ^^) I was just cruisin thru ff.net when I came across yer fic in the OP section, and I like what I've read. Now if only I can submit an OP fic, by far the only fics I've written are StarFox... ::yells:: SHONEN JUMP! HURRY UP AND PRINT OUT THE 2ND, 3RD, AND 4TH BOOKS, I CAN'T WAIT ANY LONGER FOR USOPP TO APPEAR! XD Um... yeah ^^; Great fic! ^^ |
| Memphis Lupine 2003-04-10 ch 1, | abuseI'm not too sure if my religion will allow me to worship you or not...*laughs* In any case, what with Usopp being my absolute favorite OP character (and UxK my favorite couple, by default), I was very happy to find this. I liked how you wrote Kaya and how she (as another put it) was made a bit more 'human,' and it was fluffy goodness. I adore fluffy goodness. ^^ Memphis Lupine. |
| ShayCaron 2003-03-31 ch 1, | abuseReally beautiful. Usopp and Kaya are one of my favorite couples. I love how you gave so much depth to Kaya's personality. Usopp's story was a classic, too. And the window bit _really_ made me laugh. "Oh no. This is ridiculous. How is it possible that I have never opened a window before?" |
| Y St. Ace 2003-03-12 ch 1, | abuseExcellent! I'm so glad you're writing more. I especially loved how you portrayed Usopp getting past Kaya's wall and into her heart. *two thumbs up* |