Charlie's so cute! "you don't think I can sell butter?" I think you should keep going with his POV for a while, but I'm interested to hear about Kate and Leopold! Definitely keep writing!

-for you!

KEEP GOING! IT'S LOOKING TOTTALY AWESOME!

is this supposed to be slash? i just couldn't really tell. it was very well-written, and brought up some interesting points. please continue!

I find this very intesresting. I would not mind Leo/kate but it's not necessary. Oh and will it be slash? Stuart/Charlie? Wheter or not it will I still like it a lot ;)

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OMG! I just love to read about Charlie! He is so cute! LOL. Well anyways, please continue!
And I would include a Kate & Leo chapter!!
But this is great too!

pretty good beginning

pretty good beginning

pretty good beginning

pretty good beginning

Aw! This is really cute, keep it up!

HEy! Great Job but please write something about Kate and Leopold and how they are doing. What I think you should do is write every other chapter about Kate and Leopold AND Charlie. That way we get the best of 2 worlds! Great Job! ~Madeline of Ireland

Is that finished? if it isn't, then please update!

Very nice, Liz. I don't know who any of these people are, but that could possibly be attributed to the fact that I haven't seen the movie. :o) Good job. Luv you!

It's pretty good so far, but where is it going?