Naww, this story is soo cute! I like the way you put this in Jonathons POV! Really, really good! I especially loved the part "That's not the point!" I yelled. "I came to you to write her a poem, telling her I LOVE HER! And what did I do? I got DRUNK OFF MY **. And left her there."
"Well...That is something of a pickle."
LOL LOL! Can't complain about that ending for the second chap! loved it! So please continue! And keep me updated!
Fuzzy Angel

briliant so far! please carry on with the story!

I would jsut like to say that this fic is very well written and i was laughing my ** off when I read it. I hope to see some more of this fic, assuming its not all the way done, please keep up the good work! ~*Emmy*~

hehe...Rick is going to be in so much trouble! This story is going great; written really well and all. Loved this chapter; can't wait for the next!

funny! good job!

to coin a phrase... oops! *chuckle* more please

loved it

Interesting plot twist. Rick's going to be in trouble . . . :) Can't wait for more!

Oh, he's gonn a be in so much trouble when Evie gets her hands on him! lol.

lol! that was great! jonathan os absolutely hilarious! cant wait to see evie's reaction!

~*~Bails~*~

Oh my god! You can't just leave it like that! When it said that he forgot to pick her up, that was so funny! You really have to write more!! It's so interesting and funny and cool and other good words I can't think of right now!! WRITE MORE!

OH NO! Poor Rick messed up BIG time! Yikes! Post more!

lol, cute so far, write more please

OMG, i love your story, it is the best i have read in a while. How you peaced it together from jonathans point of view is amasing. You are deffenetly my favorite Fan fic athor of all time! Keep up the fantastic work!
*Adrian*

This was hilarious! I can't wait to read how Jonathan advises Rick on how to write a love poem (this should be good!) Please continue!