 vampiregirl2009 2009-12-21 . chapter 1 Cool! |
 Helma 2006-03-02 . chapter 1 Nice story. Are you going to write more? |
 Angelscribe 2003-03-02 . chapter 1Wow, that was amazing - the writing style is perfectly suited to the story - so much is told by what is left unsaid. Excellent idea & fic ^_^ |
 SouthernersCanWrestle 2003-03-01 . chapter 1That was remarkably beautiful. You get so few classic examples of good writing on a fan fiction board. Have you considered continuing it? |
 dementedbydesign 2003-02-28 . chapter 1i really really like this story. alot people portray raven to be either some psychotic sado-masochist or make him overly nice. i like how you made him kinda deep and mysterious while still being philosophical. :) *thumbs up* |
 meowzie 2003-02-28 . chapter 1 That was so cool.Raven.sigh |