This has been one of the best reads that I have come across. You have a good grasp of just what you want to have play out in your story. It has been a wonerful story. I look forward to posabily reading more of your works.

I just wanted to say that this is one of my favourite stories- fan fiction or otherwise. Thank you (and now I have Daughter of Time on my book list!)

BRAVO! my homework piles up while i read your story... it's as addicting as my $5 Starbucks latte

I would like to see the end of this...why no continuation?

I just finished a lovely evening reading "Enticement". You are a great writer! Thank you for sharing. I love the way the love story unfolded. Good job!

This was such a lovely story that I was unfortunantly enticed (irony?) to stay up till 4 in the morning with my fixation on finishing it. But it really was that engaging and the characters were just so sympathetic and easy to relate too. You really felt a connection and interest in how it would turn out for their well-being, as well as concern when time and time again it went wrong. I must say you used a number of classic tropes that come up in fanfiction often, but rather than seeming warn and tired they were sweet and enjoyable. So very well done job on this particular fic!

That was wonderful.

There is absolutely nothing I can say that will justify quite how much I loved this. Its like, one of the BEST fics i've read, or at least, one of the only ones thats kept my awake ALL night reading. Seriously, I got home from a long shift at 8.30, and read till about 3 am, reading every word, and then read a few favorite bits twice! Its really well written, and makes you want to read more. I' ll definitely be reading more of your stuff, and hoping you write more Jareth/Sarah! Thanks for posting this, its really fantastic! :D

This was an extremely well written story. If you were to make a real book with their life in the underground and such I would do whatever it took to buy it. Is there a sequal to this? I absoultly love this story and The Labringth, this story is bound to stay on my mind for a long time.
Thank you for writing it :)

Wow. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful work of art with us. I read your story in one evening, and I must say, I don't regret procrastinating doing homework in exchange for reading your lovely story.

-YT

Truthfully, I'm not sure what to say about this story. I loved the romantic feel of the whole story, but it just wasn't my cup of tea I suppose. I hate the fact that you killed off her family for one- from what I can tell it didn't have much impact on the story aside from giving them something to share with each other. I think that you could have expanded more about 'Mark', it just felt too incomplete for me. I don't know. Also, you could have given a little more focus on the Labyrinth- I was really curious about it and how the inhabitants were doing.

Aside from that little bit, I believe that this was a good genuine romance story. Good work!

Absolutely awesome story! I love your character progression and the fact that Sarah has actually progressed from a immature teen to an adult in her thoughts and actions. It is rather irritating to read a characterization of a woman over 25 still acting like a 15 year old. The tension, both emotional and sexual is gripping and the "temptation talk" was titillating in the extreme! What I wouldn't give for a Jareth to sweet talk ME like that!
I will definitely be putting you on my favs list!

I have only recently gained an interest in perusing Labyrinth fanfiction, but I find that I am awed by this piece. Thank you so much for sharing such a treasure. Your story had many loose ends to tie, but in the end you managed to weave it all together in a manner befitting a professional author. Congratulations on such a brilliant success. Good luck in all future writing endeavors. EK!

This was sweet. Not exactly how I pictured Jareth or the Labyrinth but it was cute.

I just read the last chapter at Digital Quill and I loved it. To be exact, I loved the whole story. Kept me up into the middle of the night, but that was worth it.

I think I have to try your other stories as well. ;)