I was enthralled, speechless, heart-warmed...so much! I practically felt Jareth and Sarah's anger as my own. Amazing! I'm left with very few words that could describe how awed I am after reading The Enticement.

Pure loveliness. I absolutely loved this story =) Well done!!

That chapter was just soo soo lovely. You're a really talented writer, well done so far !

Excellent start!

I am a diehard Jareth fanatic, but reading this sexy chapter...I'll love Jareth until the day I die now!! OMG! He's so sexy, so otherworldy. And you captured all of that and the some! Words can't express your depth of talent.

Good story...I enjoyed it! I liked your characterization of Jareth & Sarah. In some other stories I've read, the characters have come across as a little corny, and would say things in a way that doesn't fit their character, etc., but that's not the case here. It was easy to believe that this story could actually happen between Jareth & Sarah and that they would react to the situation and each other as they did in your story.

that was a wonderful ending! thank you for writing this, you are a very talented writer.

*whistles* Hot story! Alone in the mountains with only each other for company, doesn't get much sweeter than that. Hm, it's probably more bittersweet right now but it wouldn't be a romance if it stayed that way! *cackles*

bookmark! Great story!

ok i thought it good exept for 2 things 1 THEY DID DANCE! 2 were is the graphic detail of sex I'M BEGGING YOU PUT IT IN THERE! but other than that I LOVE IT!

Amazingly well written and I love that you gave each character far more depth. I believe you Jareth was a nice potrail and I love how you interjected humor into this story. I thought that "I could seduce you without even touching you" was great and that whole paragraph to follow it up was great. I found myself leaning forward lol. Anyways great story!

Great job. I love the Labyrinth; there's just something so strange and enthralling about the tale, even if watching the movie today would make me a little wary/unconvinced of the outdated effects and strange puppets. I just enjoy the essence of the story, including the characters. Especially the characters.

All I can say is... That your an amazing writer. Everytime I could imagine everything, I could laugh at many of the humor. Everything, the characters were amazing, and your portrayal of Sarah and jarite were amazing. It was an inspirtation for me to read your story. I Loved it please keep on writing and tell me if you write any other stories. I am definately looking forward to reading more from you.

A truly wonderful story! ^__^ Very romantic and perfectly written. I spent so much time I should have used packing and showering on this, but even if I didn't get any sleep tonight and actually have to rush like crazy now, I don't regret it. You created an amazing piece of fiction here!

I spent most of yesterday and today reading this. I don't read many Labyrinth fanfics but I'm going to go and read more. Keep writing. x